|Reviews for Wheels on the Bus|
| candybear24 3/1/13 . chapter 9
that was beautiful
| Multiverse Fan 12/23/12 . chapter 9
I really liked this story. It is well written and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep up the good stories!
| Otherguy14 10/31/12 . chapter 9
This was really great to read. At first I didn't think it was too great, but it improved really quick. I was interested in how you could keep the story going for so long just using an 8 hour bus ride, and you pulled that off really well. I also liked how all the characters acted, and I loved the last chapter and how the story ended. I felt like you did that perfectly.
Anyway, enjoyed the story and probably going to check out your other ones now, too.
| ChuckleBunny 8/18/12 . chapter 9
| Springflake 4/9/12 . chapter 9
Oh, I loved this! And I'm not even that into this couple normally, either!
| KC-Chan13 11/12/11 . chapter 9
Words can't even describe how much I love this story!
I ADORE Sora's personality in here. He's not the happy-go-lucky goofball everyone describes him as in the fics these days, so a bonus point for you. :)
Huh, I've always thought of Kairi as the 'perfect' kind, too. :P
Awesome story, keep writing!
| Kairi9898 6/17/11 . chapter 9
wow... wowowowowow! *v* AMAZING STORY! ABSOLUTLEY AMAZING! oh i like that little song piece at the end! it was sweet! :D
| maydayed 2/19/11 . chapter 9
amazing story. *hearts* i absolutely adore plots like these where they have that whole love/hate thing going on. and your writing style blew me away.
i wish you wrote at least an epilogue! *sad face*
and also: *squeal* gosh, i love how Sora's such a sexy smartass in this story. people should write him that way more often.
| VenVen 1/24/11 . chapter 9
VERY NICE! :D
| FELordRoy 1/14/11 . chapter 2
this story is actually amazing. i love everything, especially the power of their dialogue as well as the movement of the story.
| Swordbearer 12/20/10 . chapter 9
To begin, I want to type that this story is well written. I enjoyed the beginning of this story bcause it reminded me of the semi-mysterious quality akin to waiting for godot.
Anyways, I don't think the beginning was anti-climatic as it accurately describes a bus ride between two people who may or may not have feelings for each other, well, accurately in a fictional sense.
The ending was pulled off superbly, though slightly cliche, bit I don't think the story could have differently without resorting to a tragic ending.
| Darkened Dusk 11/2/10 . chapter 9
Did you base this fic off this song? Because it fits PERFECTLY. Great story!
| Lectori Salutem 3/22/10 . chapter 9
This story is great! The first few chapters are very funny and the last few are so sweet! And the middle chapters are a great mix I love it!
| timisnotmyname 11/29/09 . chapter 4
YES! I love this chapter too!
| Katsumara 8/23/09 . chapter 9
This was such a wonderful story. I don't know why you didn't like it anymore, because I certainly did. It was fantastic. Sora and Kairi ftw.