that was beautiful

I really liked this story. It is well written and I really enjoyed it. :) Keep up the good stories!

This was really great to read. At first I didn't think it was too great, but it improved really quick. I was interested in how you could keep the story going for so long just using an 8 hour bus ride, and you pulled that off really well. I also liked how all the characters acted, and I loved the last chapter and how the story ended. I felt like you did that perfectly.

Anyway, enjoyed the story and probably going to check out your other ones now, too.

Wonderful :)

Oh, I loved this! And I'm not even that into this couple normally, either!

Words can't even describe how much I love this story!

I ADORE Sora's personality in here. He's not the happy-go-lucky goofball everyone describes him as in the fics these days, so a bonus point for you. :)

Huh, I've always thought of Kairi as the 'perfect' kind, too. :P

Awesome story, keep writing!

wow... wowowowowow! *v* AMAZING STORY! ABSOLUTLEY AMAZING! oh i like that little song piece at the end! it was sweet! :D

amazing story. *hearts* i absolutely adore plots like these where they have that whole love/hate thing going on. and your writing style blew me away.

i wish you wrote at least an epilogue! *sad face*

and also: *squeal* gosh, i love how Sora's such a sexy smartass in this story. people should write him that way more often.

VERY NICE! :D

this story is actually amazing. i love everything, especially the power of their dialogue as well as the movement of the story.

To begin, I want to type that this story is well written. I enjoyed the beginning of this story bcause it reminded me of the semi-mysterious quality akin to waiting for godot.

Anyways, I don't think the beginning was anti-climatic as it accurately describes a bus ride between two people who may or may not have feelings for each other, well, accurately in a fictional sense.

The ending was pulled off superbly, though slightly cliche, bit I don't think the story could have differently without resorting to a tragic ending.

Nice story!

Did you base this fic off this song? Because it fits PERFECTLY. Great story!

This story is great! The first few chapters are very funny and the last few are so sweet! And the middle chapters are a great mix I love it!

YES! I love this chapter too!

This was such a wonderful story. I don't know why you didn't like it anymore, because I certainly did. It was fantastic. Sora and Kairi ftw.