This IS good! I think I laughed like, 1,0 times in the chapter.

This is pretty good!

This chapter was great!^__^Please hurry up with the next chapter!

this chapter was awsome!^_^BTW is there going to be pairing in this story? Please hurry up with the next chapter!

Good story but I suggest you try to write longer chapters. Having short chapters is not always great. Thanks

Well, you chase after Sera. As far as I go I have no clue what's going to happen. You know, cliffhanger was a interesting pun... ^^

Tee-hee, I have the one advantage of at least knowing how Sera's powers work. ^^ What is materia?

Who's Marlene, what's with the fake I.D.'s, who is Shinra and what is AVALANCH? SO many questions... @_@

This looks like a really good story! Are you going to pair them with someone in this story? Please hurry up with the next chapter!

I'm taking a chance and reading your story. Forgive me if I'm confused at part since the only people I know from this game is: Yuffie, Cloud, and Aerith. C ya soon! ^^

WHE! *luffs*

Er...
^^;
Don't hurt me!
It's just so long since I've seen one worth reading, and even went so far as to forget the name of it!
Yes... only two worth reading. One was done by Catalina, the laziest authoress on the web, excluding myself, except more popular...
The other one was a really sweet one...
The mary sue attempted tofight into the plotline for a while, but seriously failed... Yuffie got rights to Vince, in the end.
^^;
The 'sue melded in very well with the plotline, and the plot itself was great, and OH GODS I'M BABBLING!
xD
Er.
Ignoring that?
Another chappy well done~!

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Okay, one of the few Mary Jane's that I've become completely addicted to...
*_*

This story is so funny man! You really have to continue it. But just a hint.. you should make the events that there are in the game as different chapters. Like that, you'll have quite long chapters and they'd be quite detailed. It shouldn't be hard, since you're using the plot of the game, not to mention that it would be easy to describe certain things too. I'll be expecting you to update this story =D

*gives yoo a lollipop, and gives Sera 2 lollipops* I hadn't given her in the other review of your other story, so I only think it's fair to give her two now =3

My earth is one of Enmal's kids, who is constantly getting a name change due to my horrible memory.

=D