*Snicker* THAT was funny! It's like having a fourteen year old Ford Prefect in Danny's class! Bravo! My only point of fact is why are you doing the telling writing, and now the showing writing? I know you can do it, reading between the lines, so why are you cutting yourself off at the knees? I know it's tricky to try Hitchhikers style, but you seem to be doing it well. Maybe a little mose discribing in Danny's POV maybe, or switching styles compleatly when you change char, like when Sam and Tucker were talking to the janitor...That might clear it up...And my next question is...WHAT HAPPENS AFTER THE VOGONS COME? Is Danny gonna save the earth from the Vogons, or go hitchiking, like Auther Dent did?? That part'll be INTERESTING...

0_0 ... *burst out laughing* *ow, my lungs* Tommy really knows how to piss somebody off.

Kinda surprised that Danny and co believed him so fast.

Horray for the update. ^_^

hm, all details important you say...including the paralizers I'll bet. Although if you have a towel I don't see any reason why you would need such a thing...(just kidding)

I very much look forward to the next chapter (and the subsequent end of the world ^_^). Maybe...two weeks is a lot of time to do something...

-Unrealistic :-)

Nice chapter. Nice cliffie. Wonder how they'll react... heh. Can't wait for more. I want to see more of Tommy interacting with everyone (and maybe school...?). Don't have to use my ideas, though.

Still a few mispunctuations, but the writing itself is definitely showing signs of improvement. You're doing a good job of keeping them in character.

~Esme

Ok. Not a good way for a unvirsal traveler to start a conversation.

Well, this is Unrealistic here. I'm very happy to see an updated chapter. I liked the part with the report. Good thing it won't matter because the world's about to be destroyed.

Good luck with saving the world this time Danny! Ha! Double Ha!

...and don't forget your towel.

the rain ghost was good too, I remember rain-god dude! I can't beleive I remembered that...

can't wait for the next one,

Unrealistic :-)

PS: Don't worry about not repling. If you were to use this email, Yami-chan would be a very confused person.

Good story plot so far.

~AlyPhantom

It IS the Hitchhikers Guide! For a moment there I wasn't too sure! Then I went back and read the summery again. then I was happy.

As for details of the books, it's been a while since I've read them. I do think it's funny that you had Ford or somebody change the entry finally. the Vogons just won't give up, will they? At least they gave us a warning this time!

I don't know how many years in the future this is, but I suppose that doesn't really matter because of the whole time travel thing.

Well, I won't say anything more otherwise I'll start rambling on about things relating to the books. Like Random and Marvin. Oh, no Marvin...!

Writing style is fine. If you're gonna do a Guide fic you might as well drag in the Douglass's humor while you're at it. It only seems right.

I can't wait to see what happens. Love the OC name by the way. It fits.

Later.

:-)

Is reviewing really all that fun? I suppose it might be fun getting reviews but I wouldn't know seeing has no one has reviewed my stories from deviantart. please read my stories my name ther is Danny2Girl. Sorry didn't mean to make that all about me. Maybe you shuld bring Danny into it soon? *shrugs* It might make it easier for the Danny Phantom freaks (like me) who have plastered their room, locker, binder, anything they can get their hands on with Danny Phanotm!
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So now Tommy's going to try to warn people about the Impending Doom, and the only ones to believe him are the Fentons? Or is he going to assume that everyone else knows about it and is just fine with the idea? I definitely can't wait to see what happens next, whatever does.

What is it with aliens greeting cars as intelligent life anyway? Are they really that believable (the cars, not the aliens)?

Update soon!

Thanx for the chap dedication, that was a surprise. Ok, what that driver did was really unnecessary(sp). What's going to happen about the destruction of Earth?

Wow. So this is kinda like a HGTTG, DP crossover?

Interesting idea, Pterodactyl! Definitely has promise in terms of humour. I've seen other stories where someone tries to figure out what's going on in Amity Park, but never one from an alien's perspective. Very interesting, especially since Tommy doesn't think anything's out of the ordinary because he doesn't know Earth's particular version of "normal".

Yeah! Another H2G2 fan! You can probably seen hints of that in my writing already ... that and a lot of other British humour :).

There's your first review...

~Esme