DAMN YOU ROOTS! YOU DESERVE TO PERISH! Uh, ...(ahem) Good story, very dramatic. Hope that smile comes off, it can be very scary and sad...

hmm cool chapter but the whole I failed the bunshin test and got a kage bunshin seems to be overdone in so many stories

will Naruto develop an ultimate defense like Gaara either way good story

interesting story. Please update.

Great sory!

hope Naruto isnt on team seven (dont like Sasuke and Sakura that much)

ok

wow, very deep. I like this, it is like a nice breath of fresh air, an original plot, the Naruto community is in need of fics with original plots. I thought it was hilarious that Hinata is scared of Naruto instead of having a crush on him. Are you going to follow the whole manga elemental affinity jargon?

aw poor naruto

this story is so sad yet so amazingly good... ;_;

So sad, anyways good chapter. I hope you can update soon!

yeeah. oh god the smile! O.o

next chapter please

so sad well i like it soo update soon

*Sigh* I really can't believe that he let that comment get to him after all the mockery and stuff he probably had at roots. Kinda seems useless to add the last part really since, its all pretty sudden. Also, I can't beleve he'd let himself become a ninja he could've left the village or something. Ninja's are tools and they will kill so why did he decide to become one even if the Hokage said to?

nice fic plz update soon

update

Is the electricity going to be a bloodline?

Are you going to make shizune a little younger so she can match up with Naruto easier?

Yo! I really like this story! This idea of Naruto being forced to become a tool is somthing I hadn't seen yet (the other ones have the concent of naruto in one form or another) and very intriging. And you are wrong on how medic nins could fix such cases. If they could, they could have just take Sauske and cure his thirst for revenge or maybe capture Orochimaru and fix the crazy part of him or maybe they could take Neji and cure him of his hate for the main house or maybe they could just capture Itachi-sama and 'convince' him that he doesn't need to messure himself! See? These cases are milder than what happend to Naruto so do you think if they can fix the above mentioned, with I am sure great difficulty, what are the chances a forced kid to turn into a tool could be cured? Nil, Nada, Zip, Kiss its ass goodbye! *takes a deep breath* ok... that was a long triad... Something about that statement of yours really pressed on my buttons so that explains... this... but really... reality check!(in Naruto Universe ofcourse... hehehe) Well, I would definately encourage for you to keep going with longer chaps! hehe.. Sayonara! (waits for 5 min.) is it done yet?

-Takashi

Ps. If you noticed my suffix for Itachi-sama... I do respect him cause he did the same thing that I desire to do but I don't have the power or guts to do it... hehehe... go on, put me in an asaylum, I DARE YOU! MuhahahaHAHA