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| Moth Gypsy 2006-12-12 ch 1,  | abuseXDD rofl XDD *ten minutes later* still rolf XD *coughchokegag* XD *dies* ...I'm favoriting this... |
| fey-magick 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseXD Oh my god. I have major love for this. I really love how you only used punctuation on Ryou's part--that's a very nice touch. great job! |
| SunamiHV 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseXD OMFGDFHGHFGFGHFDFSDG! That was hilarious! I like the ending, hahaha! XD |
| Nmutua 2006-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseUh, very nice, but I would try to make things a little more clear. I honestly think it is a nice story, but really, do YOU honestly think that people are going to read that? You should think about your reader's point of view...But keep on writing for Your an awesome author with a lot of potential, you just need to bring it on out!! |
| Yami no Tenshi chan 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseEEK!! That was written really really well! *adds to faves* LOL, a BR story that WASN'T dark adn twisted...that I love!^^ CUTE ending. I'm glad I read this. GREAT fic. Love it. *hug* Just one question...is Ryou grunting or he is saying things that you just decided to keep out? |