 Silver Butterfly07 2009-07-01 . chapter 16I LOVED Angels and Demons...haven't actually seen the movie yet. 'Digital Fortress' by Dan Brown is pretty good too.
Anyways. This chapter, while short, definitely got something done. Mainly the admitting of Sora's job to his mom. (And some AkuRoku stuff...but...well.) Yeah. CAN'T wait for the next chapter!
--Silver |
 Mitsuki Kurosaki 2009-07-01 . chapter 16Wow. Just, Wow. Please continue. |
 blu blade 2009-06-19 . chapter 16Interesting. It's been a while, and I had to start from Level One to jump back into the story, because my memory is kinda terrible. So...I really like the storyline, and Roxas is probably my favorite character, although sometimes even I get confused at his reactions. I like the sex scenes, btw, but sometimes they can get confusing when you change the way you describe it. I'm curious to see where the whole, falling in love with Sora thing is going to go...and what that'll mean for Axel. Because although I can clearly see Roxas/Sora, it's apparent that Riku is what's best!
Can't wait to see where this is headed!
-BB |
 ilovecats86 2009-06-18 . chapter 16Seeing a new chapter of a story that helped introduce me to the Kingdom Hearts fandom is always enough to bring a smile to my face ^^
Good plan Roxas, apparently somebody knows every detail about the currently-gone-missing cheerful bouncy Sora and can apply it to situations. Be patient Riku, Sora'll be fine again soon ... we hope.
Maybe we can get another chapter a bit faster next time? I understand lemons causing procrastination, if it's not writer's block, it's putting off writing a romance/lemon scene. |
 Dusty's Chocobo 2009-06-18 . chapter 16*blink* So um when are you adding more to this? :p This was a good chapter. Hopefully you can update soon the slight drama was amusing though I don't know of anyone's mom who would stay THAT calm when confronting their son about being a male ** :x Anyway update soon.
Dusty |
 Azkateelia 2009-05-09 . chapter 15->(^/^)SIMPLILY AMAZING ROXAS<)
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I'm loving your story and yay riku and sora are finally going to talk!
lots of huggles
-Azzy |
 Sky Blue Baby 2009-04-15 . chapter 15I love it so far. Can't wait to read more. |
 MarluxiaSCREAM 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Oh im liking this =D
I think the whole idea of it is just great!
The Insert Coin To Continue is genius by the way.
Off I go to read some more... |
 Renka 2009-01-22 . chapter 15Great story so far! You keep surprising me :D |
 Lady SYNdrome 2009-01-17 . chapter 15Whoa, interesting story!
I like it. ^^ XD |
 narsas 2009-01-12 . chapter 3haha Sora is such an ADD child. but at least he got Roxas a date. haha and im pretty sure him too. |
 narsas 2009-01-12 . chapter 2haha. roxas is an uke.. but so is Sora. I want them to alk to their seme's! |
 narsas 2009-01-12 . chapter 1oo. Roxas and his little crush.. brainfreeze hurts too. |
 hoshiko2kokoro 2009-01-10 . chapter 15oh god- you don't know how HAPPY i am to see this was updated. i remember the days of being a senior. t'was a **. haha.
"Sora didn’t run cheap. He was a quality **"
well this is going to get me a couple bucks from my friends. proof now. XD
thanks for updating and can't wait for the next one. even if it's a year from now or not. love this story so much!
~hoshiko |
 ilovecats86 2009-01-09 . chapter 15Nice chapter!! I was wondering exactly how Riku was going to find out about Sora's business ... and interesting twist, having Sora's MOTHER starting to get in on secret-job.
Thank you for the update |