|Reviews for young gangs of Ny|
| haliad 12/6/07 . chapter 1
Your character descriptions are a little lame.
I mean "loves nature", "retarded", "nice" hardly reveal a character. I recommend you surf on Wikipedia on some of your favorite fiction characters to get an idea of how to construct better character description and biographies, instead of just listing attributes.
Otherwise, I look forward to seeing the first chapter. I think a young gang of kids would make an interesting fic.
| schmittiedude 12/2/06 . chapter 1
seems it wil urn ourt as a good story 1 prob, u hav 2 actualy rite a story