I liked it, but didnt they get together in the end? or didnt they love eachother?

Aw no she's not dead is she?

Haha i bet he is dumbfolded.

Loving it so much, :)

I love this, :)

Well am surprised on this chapter, it is so not like Jack to be like that. But i like it.

Oh no she found out! I think it was a little to soon though.

I like how you are describing and presenting him, very well done.

I like this, but why is he doing this? Is it to lure her on the Antonia Graza or something else?

Oh my God after all that it was just a dream?!

Sequel! Where's the sequel?! This story is brilliant!

I love Munder. also lollipop reviewer doesn't know much about demonolgy do they...or the seven original deadly sins. Lust is one of those sins to act on lust and not feel anything but lust is considered naughty. Also a portal might show up since that the child will be an unholy beast because bearing a child to a demon...yeah no good thing comes from that idea...also i believe that any creature born from a demon, devil or any evil creature is considered anti-christ so yeah i got no idea why a portal would show up...*SIGH* i hate being the intelligent one...

nnniiiiiccccceeeeee... :P more? *holds out hands*

ok..why does this portal come into being? there is absolutely no reason for that. Jack has probably had sex with women who have not died in the past. Why shouldn't he. Besides, I doubt sex would damn you unles you are engaged(as Greer was) or married or a priest.

I don't know about this chapter. How would they find these photos? face recognition software? That doesn't even exist. All a sane would think is that a guy that looked like Ferryman was in some old photos. Don't skip logic just to get to where you want to go. Its cheesy.