Very nice! Now I'm sorry it took me so long to read it. You had me fooled the entire time, too. I thought the roles were exchanged, that maybe Kurama's human repentence turned out to not be enough. But, I do like the opposite effect this brought. The descriptions and everything were really great. I could see much of what was happening. Great job!

Yayness!! Thank you, Arisa!! I did like it. I don't know why that line made you laugh. The "multi-chapter sequel" one. Though I would never object to a sequel... (but you know that; you know I would never object to you writing more.)
I only found one mistake! One missing quotation mark, after "Because I saw you." That ending one isn't there. :D
Dunno what else to write. Keep writing, I'll keep reading (authors notes too!! yayness!)
I'm glad I made you smile... by... smiling... Why does that sound weird?! I only ever heard laughing was contagious! And yayness for implications... kinda sorta. XD I'm glad you actually tried on it, and I'm sorry you didn't like my songs. Depeche Mode's not my favorite, either, but it kinda sorta seemed to fit the criteria you gave me... and I don't NOT like them...
It's actually rather sad, I got a new favorite song while I was away at camp and it mighta been good for a songfic, but then I came back and you'd already written it! But it's very good. :D I like it (as I've mentioned.)
Wow... long review... anyway! Love it, keep writing, blah blah... all the stuff I tell you every time we talk. :D

amazing, loved it. very angsty, a lil confusing but whats a story without a little mystery ne?

It does beg for a sequel...its a pity I suck at writing and would probably slaughter your style and name. :\ The story was a little confusing, but I'm sure it was meant to be that way, ne? Good one-shot, it was definitely interesting! (I think it was funny because you said "Hark!" lol.)

I knew it karasu! ^ ^ but then, who else could it really have been? I liked it, you really made the story fit well with the lyrics, which most people actualy do rather poorly...

That was awesome! I was mildly confused... but I think in some obscure way, that makes more sense...

Great story!