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Reviews for: The Nargle Always Knocks Twice
Adoringly
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Loved it :]
Cannot wait to see the rest...
peregrine829
2008-01-18 . chapter 3
Interesting. I hope you get around to continuing this fic.
KylePK
2007-08-02 . chapter 3
It was cute, if a bit surreal in some way, but I liked it. You don't see much Luna/Harry fics but that is definitely my favorite ship. The ending was slightly ruined for me, which blows, because my eyes skipped over the word 'love' for some reason and I had to go back and see what got her so shocked.
crazylittlewitch
2007-04-25 . chapter 3
wow i really like this story! please write some more its really hard to find good Luna/Harry fics! (Even if you wrote a new Harry/Luna fic that would be awesome!)
The Breeze
2007-03-26 . chapter 3
Cute story. You say "cloths" at lot when most people would say "clothes", noticed it in your other story as well.

Also, if I had just chowed down on some toast, I'd make sure that I drank something to wash it down before kissing someone. :)

This story is fine the way it is, or you could continue it, let us see everyone's reaction to Harry and Luna getting together...I don't know what you're going to do, but it works both ways...

-Steve
Chained By Epiphany
2007-03-15 . chapter 3
This is, in my (not so) humble opinion, one of the more believable and enjoyable Harry and Luna 'ships out there. It's beautifully warming and genuinely sweet, and though on one hand I'd like to see more...I think it'd be just fine the way it is.

Ending it on the note you had thus far leaves it with a sort of final overtone, while continuing it feels, to me, as though you would add something that's wholly unnecessary. Mind you, that extra bit of 'unnecessary' could really make it that much better.

The fact that Harry isn’t employed as an Auror seems incredibly refreshing, as is the fact that he’s really not employed at all. So many other stories seem fixated on his possible career path while you chose what would seem to be the path of least resistance and really made it work. Luna herself seems canonical, which isn’t a terribly easy thing for most people to pull off.

All in all, I think this short bit is spot on and I look forward to seeing more works from you.
OriensRex
2006-08-16 . chapter 3
Very sweet. I've always had it in my mind that Luna and Harry desearve happiness.
TheRealSnowMonkey
2006-08-14 . chapter 3
Really good!! I could see the small south west coast seaside town so easy in my mind, but then again I do live in a small south east seaside town lol.
earthrise
2006-08-10 . chapter 2
Very unique ideas, enjoyable little drabbles.
browniris93
2006-08-10 . chapter 2
oh please continue for a million more chapters! I love it!
absolutleyfabulous
2006-08-04 . chapter 1
please continue this seems like a really good story I like it...
Talzin
2006-08-03 . chapter 1
Spiffy to see you writing again. This was a rather enjoyable scene to read and I look forward to more.
almostinsane
2006-08-03 . chapter 1
Great story! Update soon! God bless!
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