i liked it,i could really see what was happening just like my own little movie cant wait for more to come

ohh.. this looks good.. can't wait for more!!

lol
MEOW luv it keep going

Good so far.

Well... it is different from the original story... I'll give you that... Still trying to figure if I like it or not.

I like this story! It seems a tad predictable (though I suppose it has to be since we all know the myth), so I'm hoping there will be a big twist. I like the idea of a spirited Persephone! Hope you'll continue this.

Write on!
~Yume

O! I do hope that you update soon!
I love your story so far, it looks very promising!
These first 2 chapters were written so well-can't wait to read more.
Don't forget about us!
Update soon!!
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O! Very exciting, Hades is so dry and sarcastic, they should be good together... Persephone's already established personality adds another dimension to what I expect from the two of them. I'm enthralled already!

Please write more. This is the first time I've read this kind of story, and I think it's very good. ^^ Please write more. *puppy eyes*

yep, i like this persephone. hades is pretty hot too.

hm. interesting. sort of reminds me of the kore in my own story and the one in the seduction of hades. sexual persephones are rare, aren't they?

sounds tasty!. can't wait for the next update ;)