great story..so far

awesome! more

Good job !
Please hurry up with next chapter.

Dude this is great work please continue

Another promising Narcissa story, though you went way over the top with the twinspeak.

Looking forward to more.

The End! ( For now... )...

Now, closing on two years without an update for this most excellent plot, will you perhaps consider writing a bit more on the story?

I like many thing on the plot you've set it but I'll wait to see if you'd pick up the story once more and then I'll post a review worth of all the comments I have. Until that time I guess it will be rather pointless.

Here's for continue of the story... Cheers psihary

This is a wonderful start, and I'm sad that you seems to have dropped it...
If you ever feel like to continue it, please do!

Great fic. I hope you pick it back up. I can't wait to see what Harry has learned from the books from the Black Library

ohmaigas why did you stop updating?

=((

this is one of the best fics ive ever read :((

dang

:((

Nice! I always hated the Order. Pathetic. And to don't get me started on ... Fumbledore. Ha! Nice.

wish you would write more of this story!!

the way Narcissa is in this story, she could take Harry far in the war and wizarding world with her scheming.

Spectacular, well written, and well thought out. The plot is interesting, your choice of having Narcissa as a first person protagonist for much of it makes it even more so. I like where this is going, and I would love to read more of it.

You've probably portrayed one of the only realistic (because honestly, JK's version of this was mediocre at best) versions of the more war-like aspect of the HP time line that I've read in a long time. Not only that, but you've also not gone completely crazy and turned the characters into poorly written caricatures of their worst traits (a blight on and FF in general I might add), for which I heartily thank you as well.

Good on ya mate, I can't wait for more.

OMG! AWSOME! Please write more again!

Well, I just had to look this up after reading Servitude of Tonks and I have to say, so far I love it. I loved Dumbles complete break down there at the end. With all the mistakes he has made, he was either a complete and total moron or a scheming, manipulative pile of...
Anyways, I loved how Narcissa totally turned to whole order on its ear with just one meeting. I can't quite see yet how you are going to turn this into a Harry/Narcissa story like the listing said, or even if you are, since there seemed to be a little something between Harry and Tonks there for like a millisecond when he first showed up, but who knows. Can't wait to read more.

DG

Nice. I hope that you will continue.


-JW`chan ^-^