That was so good I really love the way you write.

sweet and sad. they cant be together...thats tragic(really, not sarcasm). i need to go read the sequel now.

WHO ARE THE TWO! Pleace make it clearrer.

Nice idea to merge this song with the fic to give it something more of an atmosphere than what it would probably be without it. Although a bit unclear on which of the characters was the Pred and who was the Maxi, but I liked it. :)