the idea of kaiba playing ddr is histerical. i'd pay a million bucks to see that. great story!

nice story!

It was very sweet, but some things just made me crazy. YOu switched words a lot and you used to wrong tenses for some of them. For example: Anzu began dragged Shizuka in while Shizuka pulled the other way.

It should be: Anzu began to drag Shizuka inside, while Shizuka pulled the other way.

You also forget to add words, but that can be normal. My tip for you is to read your chapters out loud. That way you can hear your mistake.

I don't know if English is your first langauge or not, if it isn't that could be your problem to and all I can say to that is keep practicing you'll get the hang of it. lol.

Sorry if you take this as a flame. I just like trying to help people.

I want a plushie! So I will review! It was very cool I never imagin Seto dancin and I like DDR too and the songs specialy butterfly oh please updated Arrange Marriage and A Strange Love Story that was wild it make me laught so much specialy Seto! Ok I review so were is my plushie?!

Aw that's so sweet! Hahahaha Seto got a better grade than Tea on the DDR!!Would you do some more to this story?

Aww...that was so fun... when Anzu yeah well you know...
I knew Seto was a good dancer...muhaha...
Keep up the good work plz ^.^

Hey
Your FF is REALLY REALLY great!
Bye!

did you know that your one of my fav authors
i love the fan fic

Normally I don't review story's but your bribe to bring of more chpater changed my mind. Wonderful story! It kept me facniated the entire time!

Aw! It was uber cute! Yay for SetoSerenity! xDD I love DDR so I'm the freak going "Oh, I know that song! I know that one too!"

Poor Shizuka. Seto is a meanie poo head. xP

You seem to like the word "shizuka-sensei"...
Anyway, although I absolutely can't imagine Seto dancing, this was another brilliant oneshot. Congratulations to this, and patiently (ha, sure) awaiting more of them,
yours
SP

Oh yeah, what a story! I am most certainly impressed. I like your descriptive words and I think you have a dream worth living ahead of you! Go for it! Keep writing for

What can I say this is Cute,adorable,appealing,good,dazziling,stunning, and all the other very good words. SxS FOREVER! You make the best one-shots.

Nice Dance story. ^.^ I'm sorry I haven't gotten around toyour other story. I've just been busy. >.< But I will. ^.^
Seto x Serenity Always Together Forever~!~

How cute! Loved it!