I have been reading this story for a while, off and on. I really enjoyed it and how well you made the characters stand through the story. Thank you for finishing it! Can't wait to read the sequel :-)

Loved it. Couldn't stop reading. Now have 3 hours to sleep before work. darn.

*sigh* I'm gonna miss Sidra. But it gave me that warm, funny feeling you get after a really good book, and the increase of longing for that sort of life or world.

Good job!
I've been watching and reading this story for a long time and I'm glad that you've persevered and finished it. The characters were excellent and I reaaly enjoyed the twist with Bluehawk, Tad and Crim.
Good luck with your future stories!

Lots of fun to read. Thanks for writing it =)

Wow - didn't see that coming.
Very well done!

Just one question: why did Altra run away? Why didn't he just jump to Sidra's side? I guess you needed him to be too late.

Why do you write w/ instead of with??

Oh. This is getting interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update. :)

I've really been enjoying your story. I'm glad that you decided to pick it back up. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next installation. :)

An update! Yay! Good chapter though it felt a bit like filler. Hope to see the events between Jadeheart and Sidra soon!

Please don't stop writing this story! Your characters are vivid and true to source and are becoming more so as you write.

I think a good thing would be to make an outline and develop your plot a bit more, maybe even combine some of the shorter chapters together.

You're doing such a great job that I think Misty Lackey herself would be thrilled with this.

oh please don't leave us hanging... please!

now sidra knows that andesha is her father she could go see him or have a heart to heart with her companion about him.

please more..

nice job on the story so far, am impressed :) i love storyline and plot and how the story is writted. And i love the main charater Sidra and her companion they make a good Herald and Companion. Can't wait for the next chapter! am wondering how bluehawk will fit into the storyline.

Alora

had a feeling that something like this might happen, still suprised and delighted though... but i thought Atra talked more to sidra? and what happened about crim and bluehawk and lucilla? where did that part of the story go?

i love this story please write another chapter soon!