That was beautiful! Please keep writing :D

this chapter was kind of bitter sweet...it seemed as if the pains were slowly ending from this point and this marriage was the key to ending their sorrows. Neji would be committed more to tenten now and tenten would be with her love. And the ending, where tenten cried, was the point in realization that it was finished, that they were finally going to be free and together. Beautiful. Heartwarming. Moving. AWESOME CHAPTER! ~yeji301

the interactions between neji and tenten were so sweet, especially when neji came to her first, instead of the hospital. That just screams out that neji utterly and undeniably loves tenten. AWESOME CHAPTER! ~yeji301

i think that this was a very moving and important chapter about the development in tenten and her depression and whatnot. She's sad and depressed and dull because neji's not with her... then, she meets lee and he tells her that it's okay to cry...and in the end, she does. She learns to accept weakness and i think that, that was very beautiful.
AWESOME CHAPTER!! ~yeji301

This first chapter was so sad. Tenten and neji deserve their happiness and i hate how the hyuuga clan treats neji-and how it affects both of them. Neji has to suffer being away from the one he loves and is torn between is loyalness for his clan and his love...so he tries to be there for both. And tenten...she is struggling to cope with the hardships of being alone and away from the person she loves. this fanfiction is amazing! ~yeji301

Dammit, I thought he was dead!

Nice spin, but really you almost had me crying, and you almost had me headdesking...

Bleh!

Aw, such a cute NejiTen story. I liked how the ending could have gone either way. It was very vague. It has my full approval.
Sorry, I've been so lazy, which is uncharacteristic of me. Usually I spend all my energy on fanfiction, and am lazy about everything else. However, although this is my only review, I have read almost all of your stories. You really have a gift for writing.

~Uchiha, Nami

Woah, that's really good. Its so sad but its really good still. lol i keep on saying really good.

GREAT! Awsome story!

I loved this, so cute!

This was such a beautiful story and well written as well! I'm glad i found this after looking back at the mountains of nejiTen fic archives.

Keep up writing! Don't stay away from writing too long *winks*

that was beautiful. very well done.

Cute, ahaha nice suspenseful ending ;)

Wa, I'm so glad you finished it~! Great job! At some point of the last chapter (I think that it was when Tenten started to feel like crying), I thought that Neji had died, but then again I wondered "hey, aren't they supposed to get married?". xD It's great that you can produce such an effect, though - it makes it all the more enjoyable. Hopefully, you will find your inspiration once more - if possible, I wish to read some more of your fics~ :D

- Mem.

Excellent. This is perhaps one of the most touching ones I've read. The pace is perfect and not a single one of the characters was OOC, not even by the slightest bit.

I don't have anything to criticise at all, really. I normally do, but this time I don't. The fiction pulled at my heartstrings and leaves me with the feeling of happiness. I frowned and times and smiled here and there. Not a word and description was wasted. Thank you so much for your fabulous contribution to the growing amount of NejiTen stories.

You deserve so much more than a lousy review from a person not bothered to log in.