I like it. Tell the writer they have talent. I can also see why you would think Fluffy and Kags but when I finished all I could think was Inu and Kags. He messes with her head and breaks her. Anyway, good job and I hope to read mote of your work!

that poem was really amazing.
i think that you should continue with the story...
i think it would make a really good plot line
the poem was really quite fantastic.
=D

This was pretty good. Okay this was awesome. Loved the poem. LoL. Well I would love it if you would make more. Thankies for letting me read! Later! =)

Lea :D

well, i'm not really a poem kinda person, but the fanfic itself is awsome, lol. are the other chappies gonna be poems too or be fanfic-like ( i understand, lol) Anyways, update ASAP!

Haha this is FUN