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Ashbear
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
OH MY GOD...I didn't mean to do that at all!

Somebody was using our stories at another account, I wrote the review, it wasn't meant for you. I know you didn't take a story, someone was using our stories. I'm so sorry. I'm going to see how to remove a review.

I AM SO SORRY TO ANYONE READING THIS, IRONIC ENDING IS NOT THE PERSON I WAS SENDING THAT REVIEW TOO, there was someone in the BLeach fandom taking both our stories, and I was reporting them, I opened the wrong window...i am so sorry.
Ashbear
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Okay, I’m going to be nice about this, honestly. I’ve had this happen way too many times to get upset. But you know what, I’m truly disappointed.

This is my story, and you know that. I don’t have to go on about how changed a FF8 story to fit another fandom. All of your stories here are plagiarized, you know that too.
Shattered Pretenses is Crimson Lies, and Almost In is First Contact… both by me. In fact, you even posted the wrong third chapter in one of your stories.
Tenth Floor, Please is Tenth Floor by Zombii, again a FF8 writer.

You know, I understand that you want to write stories, but this is not the way to do it. Removing stories from the FF8 section and replacing them here isn’t the way. You didn’t write these, how can you get any satisfaction out of posting them? I truly don’t understand.

It’s all right if you write something and have trouble, you’ll get better. However, you won’t get any better by copying my stories and posting them as your own. I’m truly sorry you felt that you needed to do this. Crimson Lies, you know I spent four years writing it, to see it come down this honestly is painful. It makes me not even want to write at times.

As for First Contact? You know, that has been taken three separate times now? It doesn’t get any easier, it just makes me wonder about people. Why even copy the author’s notes and say it was based on a situation. You know it, was based on a situation, in my life.

I’m not sure if you’re the same person who took Castles and First Contact before, I feel as if you are. Please, please write your own stories. You’ll feel so much better than the artificial praise you’re receiving.

I’m asking that you remove your stories, and yes, I posted it to stop plagiarism and reported the account to ffnet. I seriously don’t want to, this makes me honestly sick to my stomach. I want to think of people as good in general, and this…well it makes me not want to write any more.
Angel Sorano
2007-10-08 . chapter 12
Loved it! Loved how you put both drama and humor into this story! ^-^ Please up date soon!
Cerulean Crystal
2007-08-10 . chapter 12
i love it please update soon.
Its me. You should know who.
2007-08-02 . chapter 12
Nice. MORE! Now! I demand! I will come down there and kick some booty. So is the next chapter going to be some fluff? Or more stange powers unmasked? Or are you not going to update for another year and leave us all stranded?
cheerlygal
2007-07-29 . chapter 12
Wow, I like the way u have potray Squall in this chapter, it's cute:) Now I am waiting for their date to happen, seeya!:)
r
2007-07-29 . chapter 12
Good chapter, looking forward to more
Hououza
2007-07-28 . chapter 12
Magnificent chapter.

Perfect way of playing that into the story, I look forwards to seeing what further developments arise.

Good luck ?& best wishes,

Hououza
Cerulean Crystal
2007-05-24 . chapter 11
nice just needs some proofreading. i love it please update soon.
Hououza
2007-05-06 . chapter 11
Excellent chapter.

So, at least the air is cleared between them although it seems he has got some work to do.

Stil, the General is going to be in major trouble when his wife works out that he knew where Rinoa was but didn't tell her...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Jayliyah
2007-05-05 . chapter 11
Aw, that was so cute. I love it when they act intimate to each other. I laughed at Squall's reactions to the 'date'. The mushy moments between them are the best part and it's what you write so well. I also liked the bit at the end, where the mothers share in their enthusiasm. Continue and write more! Don't get lazy now!
ham on ry
2007-05-04 . chapter 11
AWESOME UPDATE! really, haha. it was most definitely NOT terrible. good job, and i can't wait till the next one XP
r
2007-05-04 . chapter 11
Great chapter, looking forward to more
Jayliyah
2007-03-26 . chapter 10
I think you really like keeping us in suspense, and I thought this was a nice break from all the present stuff that was happening - shedding some light on the past for even more development. The promise they made was sweet. I love moments like these.

Hope you update and soon. Take care.
Jayliyah
2007-03-22 . chapter 9
Hmm, interesting.. so we finally get some juicy info in this chap. I liked it, I don't know what else to say. :P The flashback with as kids and they meeting up was very cute, esp. when Squall was acting nervous, aww.
And so she knows the truth, wonder how that will be handled!
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