 WITCHBLADE86 2009-10-09 . chapter 1loved it!! |
 MissieMae 2009-10-08 . chapter 1Wow! Can I have your InuYasha? I just absolutely adore this cocky little bastard. =)
Fabulous and you really feel it when it's written in this point of view. Very new and exciting, seeing as it's a little difficult to keep the POV without sounding repetitious.
Fabulous story, fave'd. |
 VixenSerael21 2009-07-17 . chapter 1very cute. :) i got a little heated in the middle and i especially liked that part. |
 eine.hexe 2009-07-01 . chapter 1I like every single part of this.
First of all, I love it because it's so different from every other thing there is out there. You've done a great job writing in second person. Somehow, it wouldn't be the same if it were in the first or third, so three cheers for that.
Moreover, the thing with the chapters, it's awesome. The transition between them is rough and it gives an amazing effect while reading.
And then the storyline... well, it's an original idea, alright. I really love this game thing :)
I knew Inuyasha shouldn't break first, but I was surprised to see you decided to have Kagome say she loves him, since most writers would have decided to go against their original characters and make Inuyasha say it first.
All in all, thousand times thank you for sharing this ! Great job :) |
 xxPunkRockBeautyQueenxx 2009-01-28 . chapter 1i was so happy i found this again!
HEARTS DEMONICA
DaniMarie |
 Inuyashafanfreak 2008-06-25 . chapter 1Wow!
This was completely amazing.
I think I might have to read it again.
:] |
 Koshivuh 2008-06-11 . chapter 1That was really good. I'm glad I got to read it! I hope to read your other stories soon. Silverbug2012 |
 ixchen 2008-03-03 . chapter 1i liked it. :P thanks |
 ReWritten-string-of-stories 2007-11-12 . chapter 1Good! |
 Emerald-Words 2007-08-11 . chapter 1This one was s much fun i just had to read it again. |
 Ivellios 2007-08-02 . chapter 1Very sweet and well written movie. Can't wait to see what you post next. |
 MoonlitElegy 2007-08-02 . chapter 1This was brilliant. The hojo/jealousy part was pretty sweet. I love how the story built up.
:D Such a nice and detailed story you wrote. |
 tomboy ninja13 2007-06-23 . chapter 1dat fic of urs rocked i tell u!
seriously gud work n keep it up!:P |
 aya143 2007-04-29 . chapter 1even though i thought that they were occ, this was another great story. i was laughing so hard when hojo gave kagome stuff for her problem! i would spaz on my grandpa if he did some crazy shit like that! |
 neko-hanyou12 2007-03-16 . chapter 1i love it! the ending is so good! |