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WITCHBLADE86
2009-10-09 . chapter 1
loved it!!
MissieMae
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Wow! Can I have your InuYasha? I just absolutely adore this cocky little bastard. =)
Fabulous and you really feel it when it's written in this point of view. Very new and exciting, seeing as it's a little difficult to keep the POV without sounding repetitious.

Fabulous story, fave'd.
VixenSerael21
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
very cute. :) i got a little heated in the middle and i especially liked that part.
eine.hexe
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
I like every single part of this.

First of all, I love it because it's so different from every other thing there is out there. You've done a great job writing in second person. Somehow, it wouldn't be the same if it were in the first or third, so three cheers for that.

Moreover, the thing with the chapters, it's awesome. The transition between them is rough and it gives an amazing effect while reading.

And then the storyline... well, it's an original idea, alright. I really love this game thing :)

I knew Inuyasha shouldn't break first, but I was surprised to see you decided to have Kagome say she loves him, since most writers would have decided to go against their original characters and make Inuyasha say it first.

All in all, thousand times thank you for sharing this ! Great job :)
xxPunkRockBeautyQueenxx
2009-01-28 . chapter 1
i was so happy i found this again!

HEARTS DEMONICA

DaniMarie
Inuyashafanfreak
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Wow!
This was completely amazing.
I think I might have to read it again.
:]
Koshivuh
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
That was really good. I'm glad I got to read it! I hope to read your other stories soon. Silverbug2012
ixchen
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
i liked it. :P thanks
ReWritten-string-of-stories
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
Good!
Emerald-Words
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
This one was s much fun i just had to read it again.
Ivellios
2007-08-02 . chapter 1
Very sweet and well written movie. Can't wait to see what you post next.
MoonlitElegy
2007-08-02 . chapter 1
This was brilliant. The hojo/jealousy part was pretty sweet. I love how the story built up.

:D Such a nice and detailed story you wrote.
tomboy ninja13
2007-06-23 . chapter 1
dat fic of urs rocked i tell u!

seriously gud work n keep it up!:P
aya143
2007-04-29 . chapter 1
even though i thought that they were occ, this was another great story. i was laughing so hard when hojo gave kagome stuff for her problem! i would spaz on my grandpa if he did some crazy shit like that!
neko-hanyou12
2007-03-16 . chapter 1
i love it! the ending is so good!
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