Hey, yeah, it's me reading your story.

I didn't know that you can get your story taken off. I will have to change my chapter and fix stuff. but how do you do the reply back thingy on review? People do that but I no clue how.

Oh, anyways love your story so far and just to let you know, if you really inhale a cig, or something like that you can make it come out of your nose by just exhaling there.

Perfect love kills all joy

I must say, I rather loved the whole story.

Annabelle had this thing about her that made me absolutely hate her and love her at the same time. She's the exact opposite of what almost everyone else writes Two-Bit's sister as, and that was the best part, in my opinion.

I think my favorite line from it all, can't really remember where it is though, is when Annabelle was confronted by Two-Bit and, again, can't remember if it was her actually saying it or just thinking it, but how she said that all of the stuff she did was about him. I can understand how being his sister would completely suck in a lot of cases, being that he does get caught up in himself a lot, especially when things go down a hole.

All in all, very good job, and I'm looking forward to reading your other stuff as well.

really good im glad I kept with it. there were a coupple times it was hard to keep reading. But you are amazing

this story is very good!

It was kind a quick ending but it was a great chapter I like how you had everthing work out the end I hope to see more work from in the future.

UpDate son!..pLz?!?

Aw, I'm sad this is done. I think new stories are always good - we need more good fic to read!

I really like how this ended - it wasn't a pat ending where everything was fine. You know it's going to be a struggle for Annabelle in the future to stay away from the drugs and booze. She may even slip up, but you know she's learned something valuable over the time we've been following her.

"Maybe even Tim Shepard needs to get looked after every once in a while." - I loved that line. I really liked all of the words between them - it's funny, but I see it being easier for her to take all those harsh words from Tim rather than anyone else.

Great job with this, and I can't wait to see what else you've got coming=)

I'm glad you've been doing some writing again, and I thought this was a really great ending. I also love the fact that Annabelle's remained so well-rounded and real -- she's not going to change who she is just because of what people say to her, even in the last chapter. It takes a potentially fatal situation like Angela's here to see reality and even though it's the end, and judging by those last few lines I hope she decides to change her ways some.

I loved this line, too: Friends before, lovers then, strangers now.

Fabulous job. I hate to see it end, but I'm looking forward to reading more from the rest of your stories. :)

Peace,
Queen Jane

are ya ever gonna update again?

good

I had to laugh when I read your excuses for not updating because they sound a lot like my excuses when I don't update.

Anyway, on to the review: I think the last time I read this story is when it was up to ch. 13, so I had to go back and read it all again. Once again, I am extremely impressed with the characterization going on, especially with Annabelle. Like when she was talking to her mom I could feel her anger; You really put me in Annabelle's head. I like how you go off and detail what she is thinking. Keep up the super work!

Damn this story's deep. Course it should be since it has drugs involved. This is good and I love the Tim in it. I hope she stays sober, just for Two Bit's sake. I also hope she ends up making Tim jelous to get back with him. They belong together.

As for you're writing and all of that its very good. You give me a reall good picture of what the character is like personality wise. And you do a real good job with Tim and Two Bit too. You don't have many errors if any at all and I think you're grammers excelent, though I'm not a very good judge of that myself. Anyway, um, what else is there? I really can't critize much. I think you're doing an awesome job and you have a real talent. Update soon.

cant wait to read more

o...uPdATe son!...pLz?!?

wow finally an update I really hope this story isn't on another hitus and this chapter is just a tease because that's just plain mean lol. I think its a good idea that she gets with one of the Brumly boys. But in my personal opion I don't think Tim would really care much. Anyway another amazing chapter please update soon pretty please ?