o.o!! poor cloud... wow... to keep dat thing for dat long? i know the feeling... lol >< well keep on writing!! ^.^

Ah, OTW. xD (Feels weird to call ya that, as I know you by Sadhana xD) How I do love your fanfictions. They have some hidden essence that makes them seem ethereal... And I ned more. You are THE quintessence of an author. Kudos. To. You.

OMG! I luved this! My eye's are watering! This is very moving, descriptive, and well written great job! It's great 2 see another Clorith fan. ^-^ I'm putting this in a C2!
T~H~S

THAT WAS SO GOOD I LOVED THIS ONE TOO!

Hey there!!

I like the way you describe Clouds pain and guilt towards Aerith! and the in detail description of the environment (The forest!) and how it affected Cloud!

Although i loved it i felt that it was a tad OVER DESCRIPTIVE in some respects! lol but i love the way you write!! i would like to see more of you! hehehehe GO HARD!