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yi-chan
2009-12-01 . chapter 6
Poo. As good as this was fujisaku totally wins over ryosaku! ;p
Still, I enjoyed reading it, it is very well written and has a unique plot!
Be-ya
2009-11-03 . chapter 6
Kyah! I didn't quite get the ending but it was so much fun reading it :) Yay! I really look forward to seeing more of your stories! I just love how you portrayed Ryoma ^_^
-fUjI-lAwLiEt-
2009-08-12 . chapter 6
This is probably the only story that made me feel sorry for Fuji. I'm not much of a FujiSaku fan, but the part in the middle of this chapter that had the little TezuFuji moment was classic, only because of the "Then love her." part. I swear, I had so many mixed emotions in this fic.

I'm also glad you purposely made it an ambiguous ending. Even though it felt bitter-sweet, it still made sense to not really please any of the FujiSaku, or RyoSaku fans. Even though I, myself am a HUGE RyoSaku fan, I'm glad you didn't put a RyoSaku ending because it wouldn't have really fit the story.

Anyways, I have a request! PLEASE make a sequel to this one! :) I want to know if it will really end up RyoSaku or FujiSaku! :D

Well... Ja Matte Ne! X)
Hamster
2009-06-14 . chapter 6
The ending's sort of ambiguous.
So sad for Ryoma because he's waiting for Sakuno.
You should have a sequel on this story! About who will Sakuno end up with in the end.
Good job! ;D
ansonozaki
2009-06-12 . chapter 6
OMG! its so great! I love it so much!
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 6
Aw. Such lovely and ambiguous fic.
It's like none of them were happy at the end.
How can you torture my heart so?

;_;

So.. um, Fuji loves, Ryoma waits, and Sakuno is finally moving on?
Well, ano.. then, Ryoma loses?
Or did I get them all wrong.

Uwah...
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 5
That was mean of Ryoma to do that to Fuji ;_;
Man.
And his "mada mada da ne" made it worse.
Gah!
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 4
LMAO.
Ryoma ended up at Victoria's Secret.

I already told you I love this fic.
Its humor. ITS EVERYTHING.

Poor Echizen. But poorer Fuji.
;_;
I don't know who I want Sakuno to end up with.
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 3
OMG! Eiji! You made me love Eiji <3
I actually did not pay any attention to him until you made him say:

“Well, I’m a true RyoSaku fan so I assumed-“

and...

“RyoSaku is ten times better than FujiSaku!”

Hahahahahah. Geez. That's so ingenious! <3
Brownie points for you.
Even though I do like FujiSaku too ;__;

Speaking of which... I think I really am going to feel bad for Fuji in this fic.
I mean, he was the one who cheered up Sakuno during the times Ryoma rejected her.

Ah! Stupid Ochibi. If only he can be nicer, but then again, that's Ryoma.
And we love Ryoma even if he is such a pompous, smirkitty, mada-mada-da-ne speaking, arrogant, vain, yet drop dead sexy jerk. <3
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 2
I LOVE THIS FIC.
LMAO. Aw.
Ryoma stood there for an hour just picking a card for Sakuno?!
He does love her.

I love the tensions between Ryoma and Fuji as well.
So cute when Ryoma gets jealous.
iKiohri
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Hahahahah. I'm sorry I can't stop laughing at the the only "present Ryoma had ever presented her was extra .05 lead " sentence.
LMAO.

Geez, somebody needs to smack Ryoma. Really.
Hey, but to his credit, he did give her the Ponta softdrink in that one anime episode. :)
PynkPlayar
2009-04-29 . chapter 6
"Wow!" for a job well done!
This was such a sweet fic. I think the parts I enjoyed the most was when Ryoma was out shopping for gifts and everyone was like "Shopping for your girlfriend?" It was just too cute and sweet; I couldn't help but smile. :3
You may want to go back over and read it aloud to yourself if you ever come back to proofread. Some of the wording, grammar, and punctuation was weird.

Otherwise, I enjoyed reading! Keep writing!
astraldrop11
2009-04-25 . chapter 6
Typo. ;)

This was actually a good story. I mean, the story was good but there were too many extras. Like the Atobe part and some others. There were too many flashbacks and the happenings were jumbled and sometimes it just don't suit the scene. And then the bold-italicized words weren't pretty to look at, too. But anyway, I love the dialogs. Especially the one Ryoma and Sakuno said on the last part. The scenes where Ryoma was finding Sakuno a gift was so sweet, thoughtful. The card, the tripod. It was funny and cute. :D
Rukia.K.Kurosaki
2009-03-11 . chapter 6
WOW!! congrats... your fic was really nice i loved it!! i´m a big FujiSaku fan so i found it really cool but the RyoSaku part was cute too. you got me a little scared as i was lead to believe that the last chapter was the end of fujisaku... but i´m happy ( i didn´t end up crying) hehe... well i´ll stop bothering you.
Again, i loved your fic.
My best wishes.
Matta Ne!
Still-Fantasy
2009-01-06 . chapter 3
Haha, am reading this story again (that's how good it is). By the way, there's a line that you probably should change.
"in conclusion, the human mind, is in fact, a very elementary element of the human soul."
elementary element?
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