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GreyRENThead
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abuseThis was hysterical!! I absoutely LOVED it!

-faves-
Maureen Olivia Lockhart
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuse“Hello, ... ya want to speak with who? Mimi? Who's Mimi? ... OH!...just a minute... Hey Lawn chair girl, you're wanted on the phone.”

^^What a great way to be remembered.

He hit on a 'Lt. Green'? Hmm.

This was pretty funny actually.
Carryin'daBannerGoil
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome...pretty darm funny too!
xBohemianPoetx
2006-08-05
ch 1,
abusehah i love the whole sequence of it, its hysterical
MsBloodyRed
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseThis is funny, I love it =]
yellow.lucky.ducky
2006-08-04
ch 1, anon.
abusevair vair cute. i was laughing loud enough to make my sister annoyed.
little spark
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseA wise one, that Angel.

This story? In one word? Brilliant. Lt. Green...and Collins? lol, handsome bastard.

"Oh, I was just planting some underwear in Mark's bed. I like making him think Joanne and I have been messing around there. It's fun to watch him squirm"
that cracked me up, as did everyone's various offenses. "Lawn Chair Girl" :D.
I loved this. Great job!
BohoGirl
2006-08-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseHilarious! Loved that Collins asked out Lt. Green and Mimi found handcuffs a challenge of artistic expression!
Soul of a Young Man
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseTalk about a bad day... Heehee, I loved it when Collins's referred to Lt. Green as "a handsome bastard."
luvforsawyer
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseLOL! I love this story! So funny and I can actually see most of this happening. lol Especially Maureen protesting Collins's arrest. Great job!
L Ducky
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abusethat's hystarical. I love Benny in this one, too.
-faves-
Iniga
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseCute. :) Especially nice touch with Collins asking out his lookalike.
aria96
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseGood story, you even put Detective Green in. That's makes it awesome.
Data Girl 3
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseROFLOL! That was great! Just like Maureen to form a protest for every little thing! Man those guys can't stay out of trouble, can they?
MoowitMi324
2006-08-04
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS KICK **!

I LOVEED IT!!
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