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| GreyRENThead 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was hysterical!! I absoutely LOVED it! -faves- |
| Maureen Olivia Lockhart 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuse“Hello, ... ya want to speak with who? Mimi? Who's Mimi? ... OH!...just a minute... Hey Lawn chair girl, you're wanted on the phone.” ^^What a great way to be remembered. He hit on a 'Lt. Green'? Hmm. This was pretty funny actually. |
| Carryin'daBannerGoil 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome...pretty darm funny too! |
| xBohemianPoetx 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abusehah i love the whole sequence of it, its hysterical |
| MsBloodyRed 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is funny, I love it =] |
| yellow.lucky.ducky 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abusevair vair cute. i was laughing loud enough to make my sister annoyed. |
| little spark 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseA wise one, that Angel. This story? In one word? Brilliant. Lt. Green...and Collins? lol, handsome bastard. "Oh, I was just planting some underwear in Mark's bed. I like making him think Joanne and I have been messing around there. It's fun to watch him squirm" that cracked me up, as did everyone's various offenses. "Lawn Chair Girl" :D. I loved this. Great job! |
| BohoGirl 2006-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHilarious! Loved that Collins asked out Lt. Green and Mimi found handcuffs a challenge of artistic expression! |
| Soul of a Young Man 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseTalk about a bad day... Heehee, I loved it when Collins's referred to Lt. Green as "a handsome bastard." |
| luvforsawyer 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I love this story! So funny and I can actually see most of this happening. lol Especially Maureen protesting Collins's arrest. Great job! |
| L Ducky 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abusethat's hystarical. I love Benny in this one, too. -faves- |
| Iniga 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseCute. :) Especially nice touch with Collins asking out his lookalike. |
| aria96 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseGood story, you even put Detective Green in. That's makes it awesome. |
| Data Girl 3 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseROFLOL! That was great! Just like Maureen to form a protest for every little thing! Man those guys can't stay out of trouble, can they? |
| MoowitMi324 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS KICK **! I LOVEED IT!! |