Angelbride1234 2008-07-26 . chapter 27Who's Sakura gunna end up with? Lee or Sasuke? If you can't tell me, it's alright. |
buyokitty 2008-02-22 . chapter 27O...M...G...
WHY THE HELL HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED YET?
UPDATE!
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Valinor's Twilight 2007-11-27 . chapter 27nice update. |
Ai-Itsumo 2007-11-20 . chapter 27nyah i'mma gonna slap her silly! Kikai that is...cuz...yea...-ahem- rawr high school, i shall steal away your homework adn do it for...i'm not at that level yet neva mind..>.>;; lol can't wait foh moh! x3 adios |
milibloom 2007-11-03 . chapter 26by nearly killing tenten u speed up nejiten but by making neji say he doesnt love her u send it backwards why contridict(sp?) ur self?
great story!
(-: update |
Ai-Itsumo 2007-08-17 . chapter 26O.o I swear I've read hat before...-shrug- ahw ell, anywyas, twas sweet! I think it's cool that Kakashi suffers the injuries in the real world as well..thing is...how the crap do they see the blood in all that mass of bushy hair o.O lol yay, chapters on the way are looking most desirable! ~Ai-Itsumo |
Valinor's Twilight 2007-08-17 . chapter 26Nice update. |
gossipismything 2007-08-16 . chapter 26Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while, I was a bit busy. The story has been really good! Poor Sakura, I had a dream like that a while ago and I was sweating like crazy when I woke up. It felt so real, I couldn't sleep the rest of the night. |
Ai-Itsumo 2007-07-13 . chapter 25nyeh, I wanna cry, that was so sad...specially Naru killing hina and sasu. killing saku -too lazy to write full names right now- nyeh I'm gonna go sob into my pillow noww...-cries into pillows- it was good though i swear it! just very very sad nyehh -waves- byebye |
Valinor's Twilight 2007-07-13 . chapter 25It was interesting. |
IceCrome 2007-07-10 . chapter 1Okay, I'm going to try and be as NICE as possible.
I didn't like the whole I THE (GREATEST) FANFICTION WRITER line. Because you are not. There are a lot of writers better than you. Quite a bit.
Secondly, GRAMMER. Please, PLEASE use grammer. PLEASE. Why do so many authors ignore their spelling and grammer teacher?
I hope you re-do some parts of this story. It has potetial to be a good story, but just work out the major kinks. Granted, I've only read this chapter, but I can already tell enough.
Good day to you.
Sincerely,
~icecrome |
o.O 2007-06-10 . chapter 24 omg it was so good...love the story and the song
sorry i haven't had time to update in forever...school and work is crazy at the beginning of summer =P |
Soe 2007-06-09 . chapter 24 Really good chapie!!
yay nejiten rocks!
but why kakashi do that to kikai?
anyway please update soon! |
Valinor's Twilight 2007-06-09 . chapter 24Ah, Kakashi's abusive. Bad Kakashi! |
Ai-Itsumo 2007-06-09 . chapter 24NYO! update soon please! no witty comments i gotta go, sry, ttyl (nice job again!!) ~itsumo |