Wow! Very nice!

Is there a sequel to this?

I mean... with Clark acting clueless about her secret and then when she told him... his response ... that would make it harder to reveal himself as Superman.

Anyway, just something I noticed that you might want to edit

'Suddenly it became clear where his discomfort lied.' -

it's 'where his discomfort lay' not 'lied'

Anyway, great chapter and I DO mean chapter because I really hope there's a sequel with a reveal thrown in there somewhere.

NiteAngel
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this was good.

OMG!! Loved your story! I could see them sitting there talking. Your dialog felt right on.
All of the little tidbits from the movie popped and made me smile! I really liked the thought
Clark had about how fast time went on earth.
Can't wait to read the rest!

Cute take on things. So at this point Richard thinks Jason is his son and Lois has told Clark but not Richard.

So what next?

This was a great story! I really enjoyed it! And for a first too...awesome job! I'm writing my first Supes fan fic the Summer Celebration on LJ and i'm completely freaking out! I really hope mine turns out as wonderful as yours did!

Wow! You've got me hooked! Must read more!

Love this!! It's the simple moments between Lois and Clark that have the most impact, of course, great dialogue helps too. Lois has no idea what she had done at lunch, and it meant the world to Clark. I like how she's seeing Clark in this brand new light. I enjoyed Clark baiting her, lol. I would if I were in his place. Shy and sly that Kent. Really refreshing. Fanfic is so addictive...

I just hope you don't do with that photograph what I'm planning on doing in mine...I think that's the hard part of reading and writing. There are so many other people out there and there's bound to be some similarities. I've discovered that a lot with XFiles writers. I like to think of it as a collective consciousness. I said all that to ask you if that's ever happened to you and how you handle it.

This is part 1 of 4 I saw. I saw part 2; 'bout to head in that direction. Where are the other two parts?

Christians rock!

Great story. I really enjoyed it. I'd love to try and point out all the times you made reference to the older movies, but I've watched them all so much that it's all become a giant mass in my mind. Like one big movie, so when the lines were said I didn't think much of it, though they were cute. Keep up the awesome writting!

OK, I read this a long time ago but that was before I reviewed most things that I read (yes, I was that person).

Very excellent. You do a wonderful job of describing the characters and their thoughts. And the last line was an evil ending (I see why you are such good friends with B).

Now that I've refreshed myself on the story, I'm off to read your V-day fic!

This was really great, touching and funny. But Lois is really going to maim Clark when she finds out the truth!

Please, Please, PLEASE write more on this! Do they get together? Does she tell Richard? You left it on such a cliffhanger. Write more! Please?

That was a great first shot. It's a shame the plotline doesn't continue. Meanwhile, I didn't mind Lois not messing up her spelling. You still captured her character beautifully.

great story, nice deication. personally to me i love every single women that has played Lois Lane because they all play her prefectly in their own way.
anyway, great story, i love it.

What a find! I always feel profoundly fortunate when I discover gems like your story. Now I can add another author to my fave list, as well as another story too!

What a jewel! You wrote CK and LL's characters extremely well for someone who just ventured into the Superman world. I love the story. I loved that they got together, had lunch and got to catch up with each other. The whole conversation I could imagine going on between Lois and Clark. I especially loved the emotions written into LL's confiding to CK about Jason's real father. My heart ached alongside CK's when he insisted on knowing what it was like for LL when she gave birth to Jason. I could feel CK's excited anticipation, his sense of wonder, and his overwhelming love. But most tangible of all was his regret for not being there with them.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story! I hope you write more Superman-related stories in the future. You're such an asset to the cadre of excellent writers that I've had the privilege to read.

Great Googa-Mooga! Where do I begin? This was superb! I copied and pasted the whole piece into an email and sent it to myself at work to read over lunch. I was so happy!

What a wonderful little piece you've concocted here. It is so genuine and sweet - truly endearing. As I have told a few other deserving authors here, I do so love me some Clark! You capture everything I adore about him to perfection: that shyness that is inherently him, even when he "hides" it as Superman; the good heart; that charm; his hope. Clark Kent lives under your penmanship. Thanks for that.

The conversation shared in the restaraunt was phenomenal. I didn't want it to end! I could have curled up and read on and on. So much was laid bare during it all that the two just had to be closer after all was said and done. And I felt so misty-eyed at the end! The photograph! The goodnight-wishes...ep!

Touching moment, truly.

Thanks! I really enjoyed this. Please consider venturing over to this genre again!!