Great work. I look forward to reading some of your other fics.

Hiei became a healer? O.O But this sorta sounds believable too... Keep up the good work! ^^

That...would answer a lot of questions on Hiei and Yukina's father. Wow. And the timespan covered is also a little staggering, for a human mind.

This idea was very interesting. I liked it.

OMG! I love it! Please keep going!

That's certainly an interesting way of looking at it. And it would explain why they all got so worked up over a simple male child.

I don't get it. The Koorime are not Koorime? What is that supposed to mean? I don't understand it...

Huh. Interesting idea- and wonderful writing. ^^

Very interesting concept. There were a couple points when I wasn't entirely sure what you meant at first, but I'm pretty sure I worked them all out. Now I'm curious about that three-eyed healer...

Hey ! Well it's been a long time since I've been on the fanfiction scene, but the title caught my attention and I decided to check it out. And I was not disappointed in the least; this promises to be a great story and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. Have a beautiful day,

ValleyKnown

... Well. This was certainly a pleasant surprise in my in-box. :D Very good, so intresting, and really thought-provoking; I think you've outdone yourself. ^^

Wow! THat's an interesting take on the Koorime. Is the three-eyed Healer she goes to Hiei? Did he settle down with Kurama? Only it seemed like it was implied at the begining that Yukina was the only one left. Are you going to write more?
Anyways, great job!

wow. thats interesting.

i got a little lost at the end. with yukina's father having never existed. then who is her father. and what about hiei's dad?

anyway. i liked it. are you gonna go anywhere with it?
-TCM

It's definetely an interesting, and plausible, theory, and a lot of the pieces of information provided would fit in. It would seem only natural that they would hold hostilities against all forms of male. Regardless, good fic.

~Youko-Kokuryuuha

Wow!! THat was so intersting and a nice new spin on things. I just love how you seem to grab the reader and draw them in. Even if its only for a one shot!! You have to be one of the most amazing fanfic writer there is. Keep it up!!