Wow, what a nightmare (on John's part, of course)!

Nicely written, held my breath throughout.
Thanks for keeping the description vague, I don't like any ship/slash to be forced upon me.

I want a sequel, please! Give us a sequel, Hee Hee! I don't know if this is the pairing you are fond of, but can we make it a John/Elizabeth pairing? They make such a cute couple, Hee Hee! Keep up the fantastic job, LOL!

I'm almost upset that there isn't more to the story. I think you did a great job keeping the other person's identity ambiguous. But I am curious, who is your favorite pairing partner for John Sheppard. I can imagine Ronon, Teyla, or Elizabeth in this scenario, but my instinct says Teyla.

Great job. Hope to see more from you.