nice story! I DONT WANT TO GROW OLD AN WRINKLY all well guess I will any way so I am screwed. Maybe tweak the ending a bit but otherwise i like it. Almost makes me feel all old ALMOST! well catch ya later Frito!

Chips suck

You know it

CAPTAIN CRUNCH ROCKS DUDE *poke*

this was really good, i enjoyed it and thought it was sweet, looking forward to your updates on WABM and OOHW, hop they come soon!

That is one of my favorite songs. This was a great story, I like how you played out their lives. This is probably the only songfic type thing that I have ever read and enjoyed. Maybe its because I like the song so much... but then again maybe not.

Thanks.