i love this story it is so cute

Loved this. Really that's all I have. Jason's thoughts were easy to follow and very interesting. I love how perceptive that kid is;)

Hope you're still writing.

Happy writing

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denmark

OMGOSH, I can just see that all happening completely! I LOVE it!

I have read this story over and over, and I enjoy it every time. This is such a touching picture of Clark and Jason's relationship.

How ADORABLE! I love it!

I absolutely LOVED this! You wrote very well from Jason's perspecitve without making him seem too 'kiddish' or too 'grown up' You walked the line perfectly and had you not mentined it I wouldn't have known you weren't a writer.

You have a beautiful flow to your writing and it was very easy to visualize what was happening. I love the way you used temperature to convey what was happening. From him being sick to not running a fever and the warmth that came from Clark.

I just all around loved this story. I don't know if you have written more - but please do if you haven't. I'm headed now to your profile to look!

Thanks so much for the story!

Blessings

Christy

Aw, that was ADORABLE! I love how Lois' reaction just completely looks like she knows the truth, with Superman, but then she comes back and spews out a totally different conclusion. XD Poor Jason, not-quite-in-trouble.

I know I'm like a year late for reading this fanfic but i ALWAYS tend to find the best ones at the end of the main story pages.

I really liked it!

That was absolutely lovely. Thank you.

Awesome story. A new friend recommended it to me and I am totally in love with it! I wish it were part of another story because this was just too sweet a story. It's tearing up at he beauty of it. Gosh. Awesome. Just awesome.

I love it! Thank you for writing this. Ever since I saw SR, I've wanted to see (or read) something like this. And I've been searching all week for something exactly like this. I love it. Please write more like this!

I realljy liked your story. Of course only Clark would know how to make Jason feel better. That was a good way of incorporating a scene from the movie into your fic.

Good thing Clark figured out what Jason needs.

That was really adorable. I loved it. :D

:D That was really great. Good writing!