okay that was fantastic!

Wow, you just amaze me with your insight into the characters. There were so many lines I liked, this is just one of them; But it was fun to be able to unleash my wit without consequences, and even to have it thrown back at me.

I look forward to any more stories you might post in the future, or if you have a site...

Wow, I really loved this insight into JS. I think you did a great job expanding the short, yet heartbreaking/warming scene of JS and Teyla in the cafeteria. I think I felt more from him from your story than the scene itself. Good job.

Nice. A lovely, insightful look at John Sheppard. :D

Wow. This was fantastic! You wrote so eloquently of the inner John in that episode. Very well done.