aww...sweet!!

too cute... and i love the implied metaphor of the broken compass being.. something else... *wink wink*

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Heh, the second paragraph fits extremely well.

The entire thing, like all of the pieces of yours that I've read, are wonderful.

This can't be the end!?

Bugger...

Anyways, I shall now review:

Vocabulary is very important, and yoy have a wide span of it, which brought an intelligent up-lift to this short fic. I *adored* all the detail and description...

Sweet Read

(laughs) I am not going to pretend to understand that first part. Very nice.

Oh yea! Sparrabeth.

That was a great place to end it, really. I loved it, and your descriptions were nicely done.^_^ Kudos!

You're quite right - it's a nice end you have there and I don't think it'd be good for the story if it was any longer. Niece work.

Best. Jack. In. A. Fic. EVER!

Really well written! I'm loving your portrale of his character and vocabulary! So finish the rest of this chapter! Really love Jack's personifacation! I can't get over it