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Sexy Bookworm
2008-06-30
ch 103,
abuseThat...was by far the most...funny...humorous story I have ever read! Slightly disturbing, but so so funny!
Aemie
2008-05-31
ch 103,
abuseITS BACK! its back its back its back! *does happy dance around the dining room* :D yay its BACK!
lol, havent been on site to check recently, but here it is! woohoo! and its just as brilliant as ever, and a very very good reason to check the site regularly again :D yay its back!!
congrats, everyone thinks im weird following my reaction to that last bit with flack opening the door, pure genius :D
cant wait for more, get in touch if you need any help with beta-ing :)
aemie
ps YAY ITS BACK!
ForensicsFreak1988
2008-05-21
ch 103,
abuseL...M...A...O...! LOVE IT! :p
xxDark-Elfxx
2008-05-13
ch 103,
abuseGod, I missed this story!

I think I like this better than the show right now. Keep it up!

Oh, and poor Don. Danny's gonna have to beat him up...
Aranna Undomiel
2008-05-13
ch 103,
abuseLOL...oops indeed! Really funny, poor Flack ;)
“Do you really want those guys to be able to find us somewhere where we aren’t surrounded by cops?”

LOL, good point indeed, especially now Don needs to find someone to send his claim for his shrink too...LOL :)

Please update soon, you just made my day after a horrible first start..:)
LocoGreggo
2008-05-12
ch 103,
abusePoor Flack. Great update. Please continue.
LocoGreggo
2008-05-12
ch 102,
abuseOh goody on the update. wonderful job.
LocoGreggo
2008-05-12
ch 101,
abuseHehe...poor danno.
fatkat
2008-05-12
ch 103,
abuseLMFAO - that was great!

“I swear, I didn’t see nothin’!” Flack shouted. - I swear to you I about died at that point!

Awesome stuff!
rainefan
2008-05-12
ch 103,
abuseThis last one is just too, too funny. That image is going to stay in my head for the rest of the day, and I'm going to be wandering around with a silly grin on my face. Thanks for the smile!
Bec0512
2008-05-11
ch 103,
abusePoor Lindsay, and Flack, so funny. :)
p3karen
2008-05-11
ch 103,
abuseLoved it, i would love to see Don"s face.
princessg
2008-05-11
ch 103,
abuseOMG. i nearly peed myself at the end. That was amazing. LMAO. Ok I need more soon. Still wondering where Flack's furniture is.
sparkyCSI
2008-05-11
ch 103,
abuseOMG. LMAO! That was hilarious! Good lord, I needed that laugh. :D I'm so glad that you are updating this again!
serenity2bliss
2008-05-11
ch 103,
abuseLOL! The ending was the funniest bit I've ever read in a VERY long time! Can't say i felt bad for Flack because i'm sure he enjoyed the view as much as the next guy! ;)
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