Excellent story, and I am glad this is part of a trilogy because you do end it on an odd note. Good ill, taking care of story.

I love Dobby. Very nice description of everything. My money's on Lucius Malfoy right now. Glad Ron and Hermione are going to get involved. Let's see what the healer has to say.

Voldemort holding Snape and taking care of him... That's a very strange image. It's... sort of... sweet. This is kind of dissolving into some humor. Like, the ducky wallpaper and retiling - totally had me giggling! I love the sweet Snape/Lupin/Dumbleore friendship we've got going here.

Seriously weird, but I agree with Remus. This is fun!

This was really weird and sweet at the same time. Snape, Dumbledore, and Remus in the same bed is just weird! I mean, I know they're not doing anything, but it's still weird! Such a fun chapter, though.

So Madame Pomfrey is evil! Why isn't Harry, like, TELLING Dumbldore? He's even got Dobby to back him up! Whatever. Interesting chapter. I'm glad Remus is getting in on this and it was nice to have some dialogue from Ron and Hermione.

This story is so rather off the beaten path. It's very interesting, though. I like the way Harry and Snape are pretending to hate each other, and Remus is trying to find out. Characterization is slightly moot, but I can say that it's pleasant.

This is well written and interesting - and I thought it was really funny when Remus woke up in the middle of Snape's fit and was totally confused! I'm surprised at how quickly Harry and Snape became friends. Usually that takes much longer, but in the confines of this story, it seems to work. This piece seems just a little surreal to me.

This was a very good story. I will be looking around to find the sequel. (Hope there's one...)

Harry is a bit too obvious. A bit overdone. But fits his age...

LOL! Such a lovely idea: Harry looking after Severus! Brilliant!

I read this and most of your series several years ago and remember liking it. I don't know what happened to the format, but the quotes appear as boxes and there are no paragraph breaks, making it difficult to read. Is there another copy I can look at? Thanks.

Great story! The emotions are done so well and your wording is amazing. This story is both funny and very eventfull. I LOVE reading your stories, and I'm going to read and reveiw all the stories that follow this one!

UPDATE! awsome job, happy writing.

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This is brilliant so far. I absolutely love the stunts Harry's pulling to get detention, they're so blatant!