I really hope you continue this

Hahah! "He seems to be taking it quite well." "He's almost falling!" Very goodz, and really funny. :) I wonder when they'll find out who they are. :D
-GN Perone

Methinkz it was very good, best frienderly! :D I applaud. Very creative, and not common at all. :P Great grammar and detailzness too. Not like those people who THINK they're fantastic at grammar but they really actually suck. lol. Off to the next chapter! :D I have lots of readin' to do
-GN Perone

COOL!

you know you said that this was a knuxrouge story and so far I havent read a single knuxrouge part is it coming in later chapters or what?

Yay, I’m finally reviewing! :D Sorry that it’s taken me so long, but better late than never, ne? ^^ Gosh, where to start? There’s so much I want to mention… Okay, I’ll begin with the couples. First off, I love how you introduced the Karen/Hiei relationship (if you can call it that at this stage… if only Hiei wouldn’t be so cold! They could be so cute together! -^_^-); Karen’s realisation of first crush felt very natural and not forced at all, which added to the cuteness. I also really liked the partnership between her and Ruby when they said they’d help each other out with the guys they liked. It just seems so strange that someone as sweet and pure as Tikal can be on such good terms with someone like Rouge! ^^ But I guess that’s why I like it so much, Ruby’s slightly devious mind contrasts (and highlights) Karen’s innocence which makes scenes with them together very nice to read. Oh and your example of irony when Sonic realised Karen was Kevin’s sister was excellent! XD’

Okay, onto the hedgies! Gr, I am SO mad at Tim for pretending to be sick so that he wouldn’t have to see Emily!! That’s unbelievably mean; I felt so sorry for her… (Poor Amy-chan… u.u) And he made Hiei lie for him too! Still, at least Hiei felt sorry for Emily as well; I thought it was sweet how he really wanted to invite her in but couldn’t, so just clutched the door. ^^ Do I detect a hint of Shad/Amy-ness?

Inner-SonAmy fan: NO! D:<
Me: /swt *ignores*

I have to admit, although I will always be a SonAmy fan, I do like the idea of Amy finally getting the attention she deserves, even if it is from someone else, so I’m looking forward to seeing how the whole Emily/Hiei thing will work out. Plus, Tim running away meant that I got to read the hilarious video games store scene!! XD I laughed so hard when Amy thought that the chocolates for Tails were from Sonic and she started getting all angry! (Yay for Tails getting Valentine’s chocolates! :D I bet they were minty ones, ne?) And when she kept teasing him about it and he was all “I’m straight already!” XDD Plus Amy’s conflict between liking both Sonic and Tim is so cute. .> Sorry Ames!) So yeah, I loved that part. Oh and really like how you’ve used the rings as currency; I was wondering how you’d handle that and you’ve done it really well. ^^

Kevin and Ruby’s scene was both very cute and funny at the same time! XD/-^_^- I can’t believe that Kevin is so dense that he never realised that Ruby gave him chocolates ever year. Well actually I can, but you know what I mean. ^^’ I don’t think I’ve mentioned this before, but I love how you’ve made them best friends in human form; it really makes me want them to get together! And Kevin getting all protective over his little sister was a brilliant touch. :P

Right, onto more serious matters. I was really surprised to see Chaos suddenly turn up… perhaps I should have seen it coming since it was raining and all. ^^’ At first I was all “Yay, it’s Chaos! :D” then Kingy-chan showed up (he was so dark an mysterious in this chapter!) and I went “Ah… maybe not so good then.” I can’t tell whether Chaos is good or bad yet… technically he should be good due to what happened at the end of SA1, but your story is way in the future, so I guess anything could have happened to make him bad again… Perhaps he’s upset that Tikal was reincarnated and left him? That would explain why he’s following her. But he didn’t try to attack her or anything… Wah, I don’t know! But I can’t wait to find out! ^^ I get the feeling that Tikal was remembering what Chaos did to her father when they invading the Master Emerald shrine which would explain why she was so scared. Maybe she just hasn’t remembered the part when they turned him good again? It’d be really cool if Chaos turned out to be nice and stayed on her side to help her fight. ^^

Last but not least, I loved the double conversation between Hiei and Tim/Ruby at the end! XD Poor guy, I bet they’ll never let it go until he tells them. *looks up* Whoa, I’ve rambled a lot, haven’t I? Sorry, I hope you don’t mind, there where just so many awesome parts to this chapter! :D Your story continues to be as amazing as always Aya-chan, I can’t wait to read more so please update soon if you can! (I know I have absolutely no right to ask that since I haven’t updated either of my fics in about a year… /swt But still!) Ja ne!

~Starry

Friggin' awesome man. Glad to see that you decided to use Yuri, can't wait to see how he fits into everything. Update soon okay, I want to see what happens next.

LOL! XD How cute!! ^^ The TikalXShadow-ness! ^^ YAY! LOL...Hiei's got a lot of explaning to do...^.^ Continue soon, please!! ^.^ I can't wait until Josiah appears!! ^^ This'll be fun...

lol XD I love that bit at the end. So humorous!

LOVE DODECAGONS!

Rouge is Ruby and Shadow is Tim's brother.

I like it. It's awesome and it's different.
And...
It explains a lot of things.

Okay, first thing’s first: I am so happy that you’ve managed to get over your writers block!! (Writer block is evil! PURE EVIL I say!!) :D Yay for awesome new updates! That’s what this chapter was, by the way. Awesome. You had me really curious at first as to why everything was in italics… I mean, I knew it was because it was from the camera’s point of view, but I couldn’t figure out why you would choose to write it from that angle when you could have just written from the Chaotix’s perspective. I guess I was just assuming that eventually they’d switch it off and then the chapter would continue in their POV at the time that the camera footage was being filmed. So when I read “Rewind, please... I thought I saw something...” and it wasn’t in italics, I was all “O.o’?” Hehe, I’m so easily confused. ^^’ I was surprised to find the King and the Three Colours of Light watching the tape. Anyway, I don’t know if I’m making any sense at the moment, but what I’m actually trying to say is that I found the way you wrote the first half of this chapter really cool and original! I would never have thought of writing from that angle; it was great how you described how the camera jerked around and stuff as it was handed back and forth. Anyway, I’ll stop going on about the camera perspective now, sorry!

XD The Chaotix were really funny in this chapter, it’s great to finally see them all in their animal forms! Vector’s utter incompetence at being a detective was hilarious, as was Charmy’s random hyperness and messing around with the camera! ^^ You’ve got them all perfectly in character, as usual. I absolutely loved it when Tikal showed up and Vector was all “Knuckles turned into a girl!” XDD You had me laughing so much when I read that!

Now for the cloaked people… I can honestly say that I have never been more intrigued about your OCs than I am now. They get more mysterious with each new chapter! (Warning: you are about to be bombarded with my hyperactive questions that I don’t expect you to answer since they would spoil the story) Why are they changing physically? What’s with whole “if you get reborn again now, it’ll be all the better” thing?! Why does the King want to beat/kill Sonic so badly?! What did he see that he shouldn’t have that hurt him?! What was the Bishop’s promise to the Castle?!! WHAT IS THEIR SECRET THAT THEY DON’T WANT THE KING TO KNOW ABOUT?! I want to know! Heh, sorry, I’m done now. ^^’ I felt the need. I’m just so excited to find out more about them all, I really can’t wait to read more! So far the only thing you’ve confirmed is that the Castle isn’t actually human, but I kinda figured that anyway. ^^ (I love the Castle, she’s so awesome!) As for the King… I find him very interesting. He’s been so serious up till now, this is the first time I’ve ever seen him display such emotion. I have to admit, I quite like him when he’s gets all determined about how he wants to beat Sonic. ^^ I’m very curious as to why he doesn’t know everything about the Three Colours of Light, what with him being their leader and the top chess piece and all… I wonder what they’re hiding from him. But by far my favourite part of this chapter was… (You saw this coming, right?)

“Hey guys, look! I think Shadow’s out there, um, break dancing!”

XD That was so hilariously random!! And the others fell for it too! XD *continues to grin at thought of Shadow break dancing* Heh, I would –so- love to see that. ^^ Anyway, I still love this story and I still eagerly await your next chapter! I’m really looking forward to the play! :D Please update soon if you can Aya-chan!

i like this story alot my favorite of course is knuckles aka kevin i like how the story is going with the mystery characters and how it stays open for more to be put in can wait to see more thank you for the good reading so far

LOL...Valentine's Day? I HAVE to read that! ^-^ I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Makes me wonder what those guys are REALLY up to...oh CONTINUE SOON!!