This chapter could easily stand alone. I got quite a chuckle out of Miroku's opinion-gathering concerning Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, especially when he asks Naraku's opinion. Priceless!

Beautiful imagery! And I loved the way you shoed Rin and Sess's relationship. But the icing on the cake, were the last lines, when Rin reminisced about her mother.

Another exquisite piece. It is honestly a pleasure to read your stories.
"It unfolds below my heart, unfurling itself to the call of mortal danger, and I am naked to its flame."- this is my favourite sentence. It's poetic, and makes the overall feelingof the piece almost tangible.

It's wonderful!

Sneaking a quick read in between links... very, very nice! Strong visuals, and I very much liked the repetition of 'beast's body, beast's claws and beast's mouth'.

He should've kissed her after that battle... *sigh* another opportunity lost...

Oh, indeed! Very, very funny! ^_^

Absolutely hilarious! I loved the quip about the creator. ^_^

Incredible. Beautiful!

There are just no words for this! It was exquisite. I can't add any more to that. Exquisite!

Oh, wow! Another absolutely stunning piece. Your character portrayal is so accurate, and just perfect!

Aw. That was so darling! ^_^

Oh awesome! Absolutely awesome! ^_^

You are a fountain of written emotion! This was absolutely wonderful!

Such beautiful imagery; such exquisite manner of expression; such emotionally impacting language. This scene comes alive through you words. I have seen both the anime and the manga, but this rendition of that moment touched my heart even more.

Oh, another perfectly darling little one-shot. I absolutely loved it. ^_^

Nyaw! *squee* Oh, for the love of fluffness!! That was simply adorable! I am melting inside right now. That was just too darling! Absolutely wonderful, absolutely sweet and absolutely perfect!