great story
upadte soon

I like it, I dont think your going to continue, but it sure would be awesome.

might i ask where the rest of the story is? You are going to continue it,right? I mean this has the makeings to be a really funny story and i hope you continue it!

nice. Can't wait to see what happens next. and I realy hope shego and Kim hook up. grins I like them together and they will be able to keep each other sane while trapted in the past... again.

I love kp stories that take place in different eras! I would love to see more!

LMAO!! So much fun. (which, by the way, is my way of saying- awesome story)

Well, that was nice. Although, I'm wondering what Kim's reaction will be when she wakes up. Although, at least they're past the time where the witch hunts were done. Especially with Shego's abilities. It's a good start, but I'm just wondering where you'll go from here. ^_^

Comment: Please write more. ^^

Victorian times? Heh... That's a fun time for slashy stuff...
atleast I think so. I'm a Sarah Waters fan

Well, well, well, time travelling backwards to the Victorian Era, and in 1859 to boot! Just before the Civil War. Fashion would be like what Scarlett O'Hara in Gone with the Wind wore. Lots of hoop skirts shaped like a bell!

He, he, I can't help but imagine what reaction would be for the two girls to live under the glare of mid-victorian society. Especially the clothes! But I guess it won't be too much of a hassle. Their ancestors in 1900 certainly had no trouble moving and fighting and jumping and running wearing long floor-lenght dresses, if I remember that episode correctly.

Victorian Era isn't quite as cool as Pirates, and isn't anywhere as cool as Ninja Pirates, but my mind goes back to Glen Close and John Malkavich and I think, "By Jove, I think she's got something here!"

I think you've got something here. Run with it.

THAT WAS SO GAY IT HURT, AND I'M NOT TALKING ABOUT KIGO. i HATE CLIFFHANGERS! Oh well, I'll deal as long as you update soon with a really long chapter. Then I would love you homosexuality all the more.

(By the way if any of the words I used are offensive I only meant them jokingly.)

this looks like it'll be a good story. im very excited to read the next chapter. only thing i find a bit odd, is that florida became a state in 1845 if its 1859 florda's been around for a while, so shouldnt they know of it?

an intriguing beginning. I'd like to see more.

keep goin please!