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ForgottenTales
2009-12-13 . chapter 28
I really liked the Quidditch Academy. And the people there were interesting, totally different from Hogwarts. I'm just surprised Harry didn't experince a cultural shock considering how uptight the people at Hogwarts are, compared to the ones at the academy.
Harry giving Ron his Firebolt.. somehow I don't see that happening. After all, it was a gift from Sirus.
Lucas was my favourite character. He was so sweet. XD
wednsdai
2009-11-07 . chapter 28
I've never read any of this story til now. and I loved it!it's so in character.:D
ConstantSnow
2009-09-10 . chapter 14
This story is amazing, the characters are perfect, and I have to say the interaction between Harry and Malfoy as well as Ginny is better then I thought it'd be, this is a really good story and you've got something you can be proud of here, and I haven't even read the whole thing yet.
severnaya
2009-09-02 . chapter 8
You know, I wasn't that sure about this story in the beginning, but by now I'm so damn happy that I continued reading. The story is getting better with each chapter and I'm just glad it's already finished, so I don't have to wait for a new chapter but can read on right now. Until later.
Cimmerian Moon
2009-08-22 . chapter 28
Ep!
I absolutely love love loved this story.

I've never been so ecstatic over a story before.
The characters were all kept in so perfectly with the
original idea of J.K.R.
Very nicely written!

Ep!
(had to add for humour effect)
paris barud
2009-07-01 . chapter 28
OMG this story is truly amazing. I cannot wait for the sequel. So thank you very much.
TGyamiBakura
2009-04-16 . chapter 5
Wow... Your story is quite amazing lol. Probably the most perfect Draco/Harry fic I've read in quite a long time (possibly ever). I don't usually review until I've read it all but I just felt that you deserve to know how thoroughly I'm enjoying this. It's everything I look for in a Draco/Harry fic, and it's beautifully written. I will review once again when I finish it, I just thought you should know that you've 'Captivated' me! Lol XDD (my attempt at puns, sorry). Anyways awesomeness can't wait to read more!
The Wykkyd
2009-04-03 . chapter 11
First off, I should say that I really do enjoy this story. The relationships between Harry and all his friends (including Draco) are written fantastically, and i LOVE that you kept Harry pretty moralistic and not some casanova. Way to go.

There's only one problem I have with this story: it's the partying. I'm realistic, and I know that partying happens, but just...not every night! I'm a little overwhelmed by all the parties that Harry's going to...I can't even remember how many there's been since he started school. I'm fine with some partying, drunk characters do make a plot device (one I've used many times), but it seems like Harry's always drunk at these parties, and it's almost becoming an excuse for him to make out with Malfoy and things like that.

I realize that this story is very far along, and I can't wait to keep reading, but I did think to mention that some of the partying is overkill..it's starting to diminish sexual acts and emotions at points. Less is more.

Truly I don't mean this to be offensive. I do love this story and I can't wait to read it until the end! Of course, I'm sure there are readers who don't mind the partying at all--this is just my opinion.

Excellent writing overall,

Wykkyd
yaoiislife
2009-03-15 . chapter 28
i luved it!!
ur awesome
wingedstranger
2009-03-08 . chapter 23
aw sweet!
wingedstranger
2009-03-05 . chapter 16
“HARRY AND DRACO ARE AN ITEM!” He screamed.

“Goddamnit! YOU ARE A DEAD MAN TAVIS!” Draco shouted, rushing after him.


best lines ever!!
wingedstranger
2009-03-05 . chapter 15
heeheehee boyfriends
wingedstranger
2009-03-05 . chapter 14
aw poor harry...bad, MEAN draco!

i love this fic. WHOOP!
wingedstranger
2009-03-05 . chapter 13
IT'S A BED, IT'S A BED...it is a bed. right?
wingedstranger
2009-03-05 . chapter 11
eep you are amazing!
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