I absolutely loved this beautifully lyrical piece. A wonderful companion to the equalling enthralling "Of Sunsets and Tears".

Written with the soul of a poet and the heart of the romantic, totally irresistable. I just love the way Aeryn and Crichton are drawn, the achingly descriptive narrative adding lustre and making every single word count.

Wonderful. Haunting. Thank you.

There is something to be said for simplicity; you're just trying too damn hard. This story's so bogged down in flowery language that it seems like even the authors don't know what they're saying. It's ultimately completely unreadable, and I can't help but think that the authors just like to hear themselves talk. Might've even set a record for greatest number of incomprehensible run-on sentences crammed into a single story.

Once again, I am in awe of your writing. So very beautifully done, Larq. If only I were Crichton, I would be sweeping Aeryn off her feet and carrying her with me. I don't think there is anyone else who can write the characters as romantically as you can. Bravo.

great story tho it's not really my type...songs such...or poems...

oh man, i cant help reading it again. it is just simply heart melting...

Your style is sooooo beautiful. This prose is liquid poetry like lavendar on a dewy tongue in reborn spring air, tehe. Really, your style is so incredible. It floored me as I read the works you just posted. Such a grasp for poetry to express a moment and extend it to a chyrstalline clarity. Bravo.