Another interesting fic by you. Poor Rini, dying so young, but at least she has Helios to guide her.

Oh, and just a little pointer, you tied in Japanese and American things in your story.

Ex: You said out senshi, which was not used in the American version, only the Jap. Just a small tip to keep others less confused .

it was sad but sweet in the end because ofhelios and rini in the end i've already added u 2my favs list any ways i'm a 15 year old girl who loves the followin anime's: sailormoon, cardcaptor sakura,inuyasha, Bleach, and fullmetal alchemist

Very nice! I like it and it sent shivers down my spine. Very deep. Keep it up

That was so good, but so sad! Great job!