It's sad in a way.
But i love the way you wrote it. :)

o__o" W-wow, Roxas being seme for once? My thoughts on this: Finky, short, and brutal. LOL. Otherwise, the story was nicely written and done!

I REALLY LOVE your take on AkuRoku. Onesided and cruel; and Roxas on top for once. It's a nice contrast from the usual friendship fics floating around.

Poetic in twisted fashion.
Short but (sweet's not the right word).
Enjoyable to the extreme.
I do like this portrayal of AkuRoku.
Keep it up, plz.

hmm... interesting

Tough love is the only way to love.
Good job.

aw god thats sad! but really good... :D

makes me wanna cry! ROXAS IS SO MEAN! i'm gonna give axel a hug before i go!! *huggles axel!*

FUCK. That turned me on. It shouldn't have...but it did.
I think it's because up until now, I've never read such a slutty Axel in an AkuRoku lemon.
JEEZ. There aren't even that many words and it stirred such strong emotion of pity, sadness, etc. in me.
KER-FAVE

The world needs more akuroku smut like this ;D

Oh. My. God

I loved it.

Ok, that's an understatement. I adored it, I obsessed over it. It was not only amazingly written, but with such few words, you really covered in what I cover in like, a bajillion paragraphs.

It was gritty and dirty, and it was realistic. No mush, no fluff, just hard realism.

In English:

Amazing work.

-Crims

Well... that was interesting. Definitely the most unique thing I've ever read. I give you kudos for that.

I didn't know that alone could be used as a noun, either. "to be in bad company" sounds more like a verb or an adjective. Just saying.

Ok, so, as much as I really don't like the guy around, we really need our Pope back, so if you've seen Roxas anywhere, just let me know. Ok, thanks.

Repliku

Jaw. Drop.
Wow.
I love the style. Powerful.
And wow. Just wow.

whoa...::speechless::

xD RokuAku huh? Thats new, but I love it. Nice use of wording and style - something original and unique =]

That was extremly well written. I loved it, even though it was sad.