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sherbet19
2009-12-01 . chapter 11
An awesome fanfic. Very well written. Naruto's dialogue is hilarious. I loved the storyline (and also, unlike most fanfics, it did not involve massive amounts of lemon). However, it feels a little unfinished - like you could continue it more. I'm looking forward to you updating this but somehow I'm not sure that's gonna happen.
Hot-Emo-Athiest
2009-11-02 . chapter 11
I really like the anticipation this story makes me feel and how clumsy Naruto is with his words :). I really would like to read more. :D
Me
2009-10-24 . chapter 11
Ok, so this story is pure awesome. I regularly check just in case the muse bug bites you to continue with it! So, not sure if you will ever finish it, but I will continue to check it anyway!

Love your writing style :D
LastChord
2009-09-21 . chapter 11
I love this story. I love Naruto's witty remarks, the bit of angst, and I just love this story (did I mention that?).
It's a shame that this fic is dead; it'd be great to be able to read more of it.
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2009-09-16 . chapter 11
i hate myself.
i always start reading a fanfic without looking at the last update, as result that at the final chapter i see that it is probably never gonaa be updated...

all good fanfic die

will you continue or not ( please do)
Fantasy101
2009-09-12 . chapter 11
Poor confused Naruto-kun. Lol. Can't wait to see what happens next^^
Jumby
2009-08-29 . chapter 11
Thoughts: Wow.

Comments: W - wow...

Opinions: Why is this so good?! WOW.

Feedback: I'd love to see a more decisive ending chapter. Naruto's pride is going to commit suicide if he keeps being so nervous around Sasuke xDD

Rants: I DO DECLARE THIS IS GOING STRAIGHT TO MY FAVOURITES YOU BEAUTIFUL WRITER YOU. I love your style, I love the simple plot, I love your characterisation, I love where this is going, love, love, wow, wow, YES.

Thank you for sharing this amazing write!
nostratic
2009-08-25 . chapter 11
You have a very unique, humorous, memorable, and clever writing style and it totally works for this story. Real talent. Not overblown, very realistic.
So...it's been over a year; ever planning on continuing?
CloudKat
2009-08-06 . chapter 11
BEAUTIFUL characterization. I'm in love with their strage, quirky relationship-- it makes me giggle <33
Salviar
2009-07-28 . chapter 11
I'm completely and ridiculously ADDICTED to this story! I just read chapters 1 through to 11 and I loved it! I love the way you write, it's so unique and fun to read! :3
OMG
2009-07-02 . chapter 11
This is AMAZING!

I'm sure most people have their reasons for not updating, but it'd be a damn shame if you didn't get the chance to finish this.

Consider me a fan and a dutiful checker just in case you find the motivation to post another chapter. Which I hope you do!

Once again, amazing :D
Lyn
2009-05-19 . chapter 2
If that wasn't the 400th review, I sure hope to heck that THIS is. D: LOVE YOU THANK YOU GNIGHT
Lyn
2009-05-19 . chapter 10
Okay, so I fail. I misjudged how many reviews I had left. But um. Now that I can't review anymore, I want to. D: But I shall leave it off at this. I adore this story to bits. And pieces. And I love it. Thank you so much for writing it. And yknow what? I hope this is like, the 400th review. I'll feel like I've won a prize. ;D
LynLin
2009-05-18 . chapter 8
SAKURA! Hmm, a nice Sakura portrayal. I liked that. And PRESENT. I liked the present quite a bit. It was so funny. MSG, Naruto. MSG. YUM. But yes, this story is quite awesome. I hope you update soon. And that school doesn't kill you dead like it does to other people. Like me. Yes. I am currently ignoring the heck out of college in favor of reviewing this wonderful piece of fiction. Oh. And sleep too. I'm ignoring that too. D: BUT I LOVE SLEEP OH NO
LynLin
2009-05-18 . chapter 7
Neji! Ah, Neji. Everyone seems to know what's going on except Naruto and Sasuke themselves. And pretty Neji. hahahha I really like how Naruto confronted Sasuke at the end of this chapter. I don't know why, but it really resonated with me. Hm. Presents! See, I'm running out of things to say because I praise you so much already. D: D: D: I need to learn more buttkissing phrases.
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