 Amaurea6 2009-09-28 . chapter 1Yes, but this is sad. Sad, sad. |
 HPGal3 2009-08-24 . chapter 1How dare they! She is a Princess! Or, she would be, if the Southern Water Tribe's economy was as good as The Northern Water Tribe's. |
 jetara lover 2008-04-15 . chapter 1Aw...that was so... so... so sad. in my mind im thinking, Katara said,"Remember your incharge."
"Thats why I came back here to marry you because i'm in charge i can make my own rules."
Aw... that so cute. it ended happy!
not really, but i liked it! |
 chalicity 2007-05-09 . chapter 1 *sniffle*
so beautiful.
also, 2nd sentence of 3rd paragraph should be "throes," not "throws."
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 UndeadSoldier 2007-01-17 . chapter 1how sad..u should make continue it...u should make a happy ending...this story must go on...please |
 Albino Iguana 2006-11-27 . chapter 1AWESOME! Very realistic. I'm so tired of fluff. Bravo, A majillion thumbs up! |
 Jewell21 2006-11-19 . chapter 1wow. no, i think you should just leave it imcomplete. more angsty that way ^_^ loved it.
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 Kawaii Berri 2006-11-07 . chapter 1*sniffs* So sad ;-;
Write a sequel! *sniffs louder* |
 Zorione 2006-08-28 . chapter 1T_T So beautiful and sad |
 Junsui Chikyuu 2006-08-24 . chapter 1You're right, the happy ending is over-rated... but this doesn't sound like the end at all. I mean, obviously, it IS. But before I read your AN I would not have thought so at all... Because with the personalities you seemed to give them, it didn't feel as if they would have given in in such a short amount of space/time... but I guess there are breaking points for everyone. Comment=compliment! Yay for one-shots! |
 smartcheer917 2006-08-18 . chapter 1i feel so sad |
 Z Star The Hidden Dragon 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Oh! I despise those stuffy, fascist officials! Standing in the way of love like that! It makes me sick!
This fic has eaten away at me, I feel so sorry for Zuko and Katara. There just has to be something Zuko can do damn it!
Good lord you are a good writer... |
 Outsane 2006-08-07 . chapter 1Oh, sweet baby jesus. I was already in a crying mood because I'm tired and I just spent the better part of an hour on the phone with some retarded techie (who did nothing) and i'm pms-ing and GODDAMMIT you made me cry. >_<
Go write something happy now, dammit. Gr.
Er, but other than the making me cry thing, it was well-written and in-character and all that. I'm just finding it hard to pick out the good characteristics of this piece when it MADE ME CRY. |
 Rashaka 2006-08-06 . chapter 1That was pretty and sad. I sort of want to punch Zuko for forgetting who his daddy is. Would Ozai have tolerated that kind of lip from his generals? Not a chance. Zuko just needs to scare them properly and remind them that his word is law, and all that, and he can marry who he wants and anyone who objects can get their heads on a wall. |
 fearlessgurl283 2006-08-06 . chapter 1AMAZING! (is speechless) |