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Amaurea6
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Yes, but this is sad. Sad, sad.
HPGal3
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
How dare they! She is a Princess! Or, she would be, if the Southern Water Tribe's economy was as good as The Northern Water Tribe's.
jetara lover
2008-04-15 . chapter 1
Aw...that was so... so... so sad. in my mind im thinking, Katara said,"Remember your incharge."
"Thats why I came back here to marry you because i'm in charge i can make my own rules."
Aw... that so cute. it ended happy!
not really, but i liked it!
chalicity
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
*sniffle*

so beautiful.

also, 2nd sentence of 3rd paragraph should be "throes," not "throws."

UndeadSoldier
2007-01-17 . chapter 1
how sad..u should make continue it...u should make a happy ending...this story must go on...please
Albino Iguana
2006-11-27 . chapter 1
AWESOME! Very realistic. I'm so tired of fluff. Bravo, A majillion thumbs up!
Jewell21
2006-11-19 . chapter 1
wow. no, i think you should just leave it imcomplete. more angsty that way ^_^ loved it.

Kawaii Berri
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
*sniffs* So sad ;-;
Write a sequel! *sniffs louder*
Zorione
2006-08-28 . chapter 1
T_T So beautiful and sad
Junsui Chikyuu
2006-08-24 . chapter 1
You're right, the happy ending is over-rated... but this doesn't sound like the end at all. I mean, obviously, it IS. But before I read your AN I would not have thought so at all... Because with the personalities you seemed to give them, it didn't feel as if they would have given in in such a short amount of space/time... but I guess there are breaking points for everyone. Comment=compliment! Yay for one-shots!
smartcheer917
2006-08-18 . chapter 1
i feel so sad
Z Star The Hidden Dragon
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
Oh! I despise those stuffy, fascist officials! Standing in the way of love like that! It makes me sick!

This fic has eaten away at me, I feel so sorry for Zuko and Katara. There just has to be something Zuko can do damn it!

Good lord you are a good writer...
Outsane
2006-08-07 . chapter 1
Oh, sweet baby jesus. I was already in a crying mood because I'm tired and I just spent the better part of an hour on the phone with some retarded techie (who did nothing) and i'm pms-ing and GODDAMMIT you made me cry. >_<

Go write something happy now, dammit. Gr.

Er, but other than the making me cry thing, it was well-written and in-character and all that. I'm just finding it hard to pick out the good characteristics of this piece when it MADE ME CRY.
Rashaka
2006-08-06 . chapter 1
That was pretty and sad. I sort of want to punch Zuko for forgetting who his daddy is. Would Ozai have tolerated that kind of lip from his generals? Not a chance. Zuko just needs to scare them properly and remind them that his word is law, and all that, and he can marry who he wants and anyone who objects can get their heads on a wall.
fearlessgurl283
2006-08-06 . chapter 1
AMAZING! (is speechless)
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