Its an awsome story UPDATE SOON!

Hehe, hi there, Camay! I didn't sign in...am too lazy.

Just finished reading your chapter and enjoyed it. Am also happy for you that you've gotten so many readers these past few years! :D Keep up the good work and take care!

please continue it is very interestingly. PLEASE CONTINUE!

BLOODY FRICKEN AWESOME!
update soon
=)

I think your writing is wonderful! But since Tohru left the Main House, the decided pairing has fallen off the radar. There is no communication between Tohru and Akito. I find that odd for someone as possessive as Akito, or as attached as Tohru. Also, Kumo has disappeared - her gift from Akito.
Your earlier chapters were very original, now however it seems as though your following the manga.
Please, don't lose the enthusiasm I felt so clearly. I look forward to your next chapter.
~~TTFN, Emu

Hi!! Um I was just wondering when are you going to update the next chapter? or if you are going to continue with this story at all !! Pliz keep writting I really have enjoyed reading it ! its seems like they are just a few akitohru stories...and this one´s really good! Pliz update soon!
This is my e mail: if by any chance you are still going to keep up with this story, let me know when the next chapter´s up ok?? I´ll love to keep reading!!
Cheers !!
Yazz

i liked this chapter. you introduced kagura into the story without just making it a recap of the episode. i hope you have the time to update soon, because i really want to know what's going to happen with akito and tohru. love your story! :)

dont worry you did good on your story even if you havent done so in a while...i hope you update soon! i really want to find out what happens to akito and tohru!...

I am really liking your retelling of the story. I can't wait to see what develops between Kyo and Tohru. Is Akito ever going to come back into the picture?

update soon

HURRY UP!
What's taking you so long. It doesn't take you months to write a couple more cchapters. Your probably making all of us readers MAD!
I've been waiting for months for the next chapter.
Huh
Just please hurry.

Things I liked:
Cute flashback
I like what you said about the two sides fighting
You get Akito pretty well but he seems more...well in control of everything including his own emotions.
I love the use of the flashbacks and dream sequences
Yay Yuki-kun XD and Haru-kun as well! - my favorite characters
I really liked the Yuki-kun/Haru-kun itnteraction
Cute last line

Ways to improve:
Work on sentence structure and concise sentences
Spelling error: "embarassing"

~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
I think it's junishi all the time because that means all twelve of them, junishi is both singular and plural so don't use junishis
I'm not sure Aya and Shigure would behave this way in front of Akito
Too many characters seem to be involved at this point
"unable to react dued" - don't you mean due?
Pacing is a bit fast

Hey, sorry I haven't been reviewing very much I was kept super busy with school but I'll try to review much more frequently from now on.

Things I liked:
Good character interactions
Love the description of the dress
Lol, I like how you have Akito changing
Great descriptions
The flashback was pretty cute
I really like the paragraph right after the flashback'
Good way to end it

Ways to improve:
Try to give a little more variety in sentence openings
Try not to repeat words: example- "asked"
Attempt to give the chapter some amount of emotional depth

~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Short choppy sentence
Seems a bit bland, try to lengthen the sentences around the dialogue a little or just put straight dialogue.
Author Notes
Sentences seem a little stiff to me
I'm surprised that this is the reaction she's getting from her grandparents after so long

i LOVE ur story, but i've missed Akito in the past chaps, is he coming back soon?

Hm... A lot of flashback...