I... I... I THINK I'M GOING TO CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its to Fugen good!!!! you must do really well in school!!!!!

Good, but not much new material. Mostly summery. Could you write more?

I've read this so many times and it keeps getting better every single time I read it! I think it should be expanded upon. ;-)

come on write more........i like the story......^_^

Okay Well atch your spelling and Goku does have a brother

is this a chaptered fic?? i hope it is cuz this was an interesting story. e-mail me k? k! DBGTgurl@go.com kewl!!!!

Wonderfully done. I'll work with my version, and I hope to see more.