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| Masta of the Big Pants 2008-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust started reading this story and can't stop. Keep it going man! It's very good. |
| Letter D 2007-08-01 ch 7,  | abuseGlad to see you're still at it. - an old friend :P |
| Nodoze 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseLoved the story . gives a real n00b perspective on things. |
| Hannah 2007-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseCapt this is freaking AMAZING!! lol I loved it! |
| Xury 2006-11-06 ch 4, | abuseXury comes along for his own uptake on the story... First off, I hear this is your first fic, dunno whether it's true or not, but if it is, you did a decent job. The Pros were the sly bits of humor added, and how things played out well. Descriptions on Outbreak stuck out well in my mind. The Cons: Grammer, dude. Revise some of your older chapters. A lot of times you havewords that haveno spacesin it. Spelling's easier to check then Grammer, but that wasn't that bad. Hopefully you'll get an update sooner or later, cause it's been, what, two months now? Anyway I'll continue reading, just continue writing! -Xury |
| Letter D 2006-10-03 ch 4, | abuseGetting better and better, my man. That last line amps up the anticipation for the next chapter like it's on speed. I don't even know what that means, but it's GOOD! |
| mrguy08 2006-08-26 ch 3, | abuseNice work, I think it came off as a real squishy themed chapter to which is kind of funny. |
| Letter D 2006-08-25 ch 3, | abuseCap's first real adventure out. They grow so fast, don't they? :P also, "but can't turn around due to the angry giant hurling hunks of metal at him." lmao, I don't know why but I LOVED that line. Something about it was so subtly hilarious to me. |
| Letter D 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abuseI agree, the ending wasn't corny at all. That's actually the first thing I thought when I first started playing CoH :D again, keep'm coming! |
| mrguy08 2006-08-11 ch 2, | abuseWow, you really put a whole new spin on the Outbreak thing. I'm glad that you took a bit of a different take on it rather than just cough up the game dialogue verbatim. Also, I don't think the ending was corny, everyone likes capes:) |
| mrguy08 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseYeah this is a pretty nice read. I'll be sure to follow it. |
| Letter D 2006-08-06 ch 1, | abuseFrom one first time author who started with CoH to another, this is a great introductory. I'll be sticking with this story from start to finish! |