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| Kelei 2007-02-24 ch 10,  | abuseVery sweet fic. Well written BB but didn't think so much of the actual case/kidnapping bit. More angst in that area would have made this great!! |
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy 2007-02-03 ch 10, | abusecute fic. great writing. Loved it. |
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy 2007-02-03 ch 8, | abuseuh oh...what is seeley going to do? |
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy 2007-02-03 ch 7, | abusepizza man has a crush huh? I smell rotten pepperoni! |
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy 2007-02-03 ch 6, | abuseLast couple of chapters have been really good. Boy these two are something else. I hope Tempe is ok. |
| ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery intense. Unsettling way to start. Cant wait to see where this heads. |
| oranfly 2006-08-11 ch 10, | abuseVery cute story and the plot was definetly well thought out. Job well done! |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 10, | abuseWell, I'm not the biggest fan of resolved sexual tension, but it was well worked out. Only one thing bothers me... what the hell was he doing with Brennan all the time he had her? Because he had her for 3 whole days before Booth turned up. But anyway I guess that's not important. I'm glad you had Bren save herself, she's not a damsel in distress kinda person, though I enjoy watching Booth save her every once in a while. Too bad you took the focus on her by getting him shot. Oh well. Anyway, durn good story and I'll be on the lookout for others from you. |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 8, | abuseBrilliant detective reasoning on the Brian pizzaboy thing. And Hodgins is so cute when he tries to play with the big boys. Your character writing is really ace. |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 6, | abuseOnce again I must congratulate you. Excellent Angela writing and good Booth dialogues too. That scene with him bashing Jack into the wall was so in character I laughed out loud. I honestly dunno how he hasn't yet been sued for police brutality (if the FBI can be considered "police"). |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 4, | abuseWell, you've certainly got MY attention. Good thing you posted this all on one go or I'd be chewing my fingernails waiting for the next installment. I'm impressed by how you write Angela. You're really good! Everything she says sounds exactly like her. Even the wisecracks. |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 2, | abuseHahaha. Kudos on the Mulder and Scully thing. Straight from Angela's mouth into the story. And it was just like Bones not to know what the hell she was talking about. Very intuitive. |
| Black Tulip 2006-08-06 ch 1, | abusePoor Brennan. I can understand where she's coming from very well. Not every woman likes to be talked down to, not everyone likes to open up. He had no business pushing her like that, though I know he meant well. Just because she's not "warm" like everyone else doesn't necessarily mean she's cold. Good chapter. It struck a chord. Too bad you made her cave in the third to last paragraph. It fits the story, and I wouldn't say it's exactly off character, but it disapointed me. |
| sidleidol03 2006-08-06 ch 10, | abuseWow, that was a really good story...it was no wild and crazy...but nor was it boring and dry. It was just the right story that I wanted to read! |
| Howdylynn 2006-08-06 ch 10, | abuseAw! Big happy sigh at the end... |