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| Buni-San 2008-07-15 ch 4,  | abuseAwesome story! You should really update soon... T.T |
| Thozmp Corris 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abuseI like this story, and I wonder if you are ever going to continue it. |
| DoodleBot 2008-07-06 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE that this is from Hikaru's point of view, I adore how you explain his thoughts and feelings. And it was SUCH a good plot twist to have Anko make that mistake. Epic battle following. |
| DoodleBot 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseOh man! I am enjoying this so much! I can't explain my glee discovering that you have another Naruto fanfiction! E! Anyways, I wonce made a Naruto fan character and she was a clligrapher, so the part about the tags is almost exactly like what I had envisioned for her! 'cept she could do ones with attributes to shock, increase weight, etc. So awesome! Thank you again for writing! :D |
| netbreaker0 2008-07-04 ch 4, | abuseWell I just finished reading this whole thing staight through and I have to say I'm pleased. You have two nice character's here with Hikaru and Asuka. In the begining I was a little worried that Asuka would be a little whiner but she's really starting to come into her own. I hope to learn more about her in the future. Seeing Anko and them fight was funny and a good thing. Anko strikes me as the kind of person who would want a tough team and this little fight proves that. I find it funny how most people use Anko as a jounin teacher in these kinds of stories. I also liked how Asuka and Hikaru talked about Naruto's crush on Sakura and maybe if they could help the guy. I kinda wonder what's gonna happen when they meet Hinata. I could really see Hinata and Asuka becoming close friends. Anyways please update soon. |
| Pawz4thought 2008-07-03 ch 4, | abuseThis is FUNNIFUL! Especially: “Yes, you are our new sensei and as such I will show you the proper respect,” I said aloud. Then I dropped my voice to a whisper. “And if you ever hurt Asuka, they will never find your body.” |
| Fayth 2008-06-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is a good story, I rather like it. Apparently, though, you're not continuing it, and this makes me sad. I like the realistic response to the Jinchuuriki Gaara and Naruto. It only makes sense that if something gives one nation an edge, the other nations are going to want to try it. I'm actually surprised nothing like this happened in canon (or perhaps it did, and I'm just not far along enough in canon to have gotten there yet). Also, the canon characters are all very in-character, which I've gotten used to in your work and is going to utterly spoil me for other fanfiction. :). |
| NarutoFan2291 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abusethis story kicks so much ** dude i love Hikarus laid back attitude XD keep up the great work |
| tomato sauce 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abusewow, this is really great! please continue, i'll be watching for more! |
| xSilverIvyx 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abusethis story is amazing! Hikaru and Asuka are both realistic and funny, i love them. I can't wait until you update again, the story is just getting better and better with each chapter. |
| yuni347 2008-05-25 ch 4, | abusecould you PLEASE update this? I'll give you a virtual cookie! *puppy dog eyes* |
| inuficcrzy 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseoh god. anko? let the merry hell begin. |
| Taka 2008-05-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseMan! This story is Freakin AMAZING! You simply must start updating again! |
| Randall 2008-05-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseSo... how many reviews do you want before you'll update this piece? I'm mean come on! It's genius with all the crude/subtle/sarcastic humor! |
| InsomniacNarutoReader 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseso im in love with Team 8 and Nightmar of Future Past. So i figured i would read this and i sorta fell in love!! you'll update this...right!?!? |