LOL I LOVE YOUR STORIES I am a big fan of your stories (if i spell that right) Stitch & Angel Forever :)

Its about time Lilo lightened up about Kioko! Come on! Yeah Kioko was out for Stitch but that changed didn't it. He didn't use her or her family. He saved Angel, saved Stitch, saved their kids, saved HER for crying out loud. Who cares about the original motive?! He never carried it out and thats that. Huh. She should be more angry with the Galactic Federation and Cobra for hiring him in the first place! They were the ones who wanted Stitch dead. Lilo really needs to see the whole picture and not just focus on one mistake in the whole masterpiece! Hope she learns her alchemy fast enough. She'll need it when Hashi comes back into the story.

Wow. Nice ending I'll look foward to seeing the next one.

Awesome story, Kioko! It was better than I expected it to be, and even gave me very sudden surprises. I thought for sure the ohana was going to get mad because of Kioko. Can't wait for another Tejina Chronicles story, and will you be able to start a Naruto-like Lilo and Stitch saga?

Wow, many things were finally revealed in this chapter. ...So Kioko is going to destroy the world after all? Well I shall now that in the next story which I will try to be pateint for.

Hm, they took it better than I thought. Including Angel. I wonder what Stitch'd think of learning that both he & Kioko are the apples of Angel's eye. He'd orobably think that Kioko was trying to steal her from him or something, & try to wail on him. That'd be SO Stitch-ish.

(claps) wonderful! Excellently great! I'm so speechless...it was just so funny and heart-warming. The whole wrestling thing Angel and Stitch did...was hilarious! YOu're stories are AWESOME!

Nicely done, kioko. Very well developed chapter. The description was better than I expected, the graphical images fit perfectly into the story, and the dialogue is supurb.

Hmm, perhaps Lilo might reveal Kioko's real reason for being on Earth to her family right in front of him, so they'd all drive him away, & make him never want to come back to Earth... ever again. Then again, Lilo's not like that. You think the family will find out about why Kioko ever came to Earth? Well, anyway, update soon.

Well the day has come for Kioko to leave Earth, what a sad day it shall be. Lilo and alcohol equals headache very typical though sneaky.

Please Continue.

Excellent work! The quality of this chapter is simply amazing!.

By the way, did you ever read the final chapters of Haunted? If not, could you do that, and give me your final thoughts?

Kioko... this chapter was gruesome yet amazing.

I LOVE IT PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS

Will I think I understand Kioko a little better now so I can go back to my story. That is if you do not thought a other curveball.

Wow, mental anguish like that must make every moment of his seemingly endless life hell. Say, exactly how long DOES a Korigan live anyway? No Psychonaut alive could cleanse that mnd of all its mental anguish. Anyway, it seems that the Kioko shown most is an innocent victim who seems to be the holder of the key that'd spell the end for an otherwise infinitely-existing universe. Why else would he have 3 seperate personas? If the other 2 would go, being destroyed by Kioko's will power, he could get rid of a LOAD of mental anguish, & feel even better than he did when his folks were alive. Speaking of them, I'm certain that Kioko's REAL creators, his folks, wouldn't be too proud of him, considering what he is now. If anything, they're probably feeling very disappointed from their watch over him in the spirit world. Wonder if Lilo can get over her pain from learning all that about Kioko & help him to get rid of all this pain. Well, anyway, update soon.