One word: breathtaking.

AHH!
YOU ** TWISTED SON OF A **!

THEY WERE SUPOSSED TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
I HATE YOU!

I HATE YOU!

great ending tho.

Wow.

I thought time would pass in such a way that he'd die the same day he killed her.

Never imained if she got revived, she'd be so sick with rotten innards but wow it works.

Great story

Enchanting...a dark, disturbing tale of twisted love. I found this story to be a very good read. A saw a few flaws here and there, but nothing major. You might want to take everything out fo the presen tense though. It makes reading this a tad bit confusing. Still, a great read.

OH.MY.GOD.

That was heartwrenchingly beautiful, and hauntingly disturbing. There was something indefinitely immortal in this story, although there was a very dark underlining laced within the words that you've written. However, I loved your story, I feel like crying when I read it. Although this Aerith featured in your story was so different from how I know her to be, but there are still remnants of her, especially her happiness, her kindness and her smile. I love your writing. Thank you for writing such a touching story.

this is disturbing, and haunting, and beautiful.

i can -definitely- see this happening. if cloud hadn't become benignly depressed (lazing about) and became obsessively depressed instead (mad)...

:/

Oh damn... I read this at LJ and once more again, and still I feel chills afterwards... Bravo, my dear, for writing such a damn remarkable story. :) I was hoping that they would die together, actually, since Cloud is already fated to die at 35 years of age or before, but at least he saved her in the end.

Holy. Crap. (!)

Truly haunting...

i teared up while reading this. this is just beyond words, very,very beautiful. Its depression, but so full of passion and love, it makes your head spin.

I'm crying when I'm writing this. It really made me think what could happen. It made me feel what both Cloud and Aerith were feeling. I loved it, in some way.

Wow. This was morbid, depressing, surprising, and most of all, absolutley wonderful. You brought the characters to life and gave them a great story. This was an unexpected twist to all those other Aerith-comes-back-to-life stories. I really liked it!

I enjoyed it up until the end. The story has a great plot and the sturcture was good, I just wished that it would have ended more cheerful.

Wow. Just wow. I really am lost for words. The story was so powerful that I could feel the emotions of the two. It was a unique (as far as I've read) take on reviving Aeris and done so intricately. I can't think of anything else to say but I sing your praises for giving us such a piece.

This story marks the first time I cried at a fanfiction. Wow... I'm really not sure what to say about it. This is the best fic I've read in a long time. Just keep writing such great work. Your fans here will appreciate it!