aw it was so cute. But i have to saw killing shiro wasn't my favorite part but that made the whole thing, it was great.

The crazy thing is that I can picture all of this happening. It almost made me cry (an accomplishment). I think it's a wonderfully written story, even if he did talk a bit much for a guy about to die.

aw... so sweet... even though he kinda did talk a lot 4 a guy that was gonna die but still so... emotional... it fills the reader up... great job!...
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how depressing...but good

YOU KILLED HITSUGAYA! WHY HIM!?! oh well i guess it makes it more dramatic T-T

this is freaken cute, i love wha he said to her.
But still angry that you kiled him off.

Omg, kore wa kawaii desu! aishteru. x33
This was so cute. I love you for writing this. Haha, i think that came out right. Anyways, keep writing. You could do a sequel to this, revolving around what Hinamori feels or something.
-TC x3

aww. i like it

omg...that...was...so...SAD! TT wow...that almost made me cry! (believe me, its REALLY hard to make me cry) i love toshiro TT but that was just so good! even though you killed him >3

Yes..very suprised you killed off Shiro in this fanfic =O!
Read it all the way through and you made me [just joking lol, replace 'you made me' with 'I'] abit teary here, sad way he died

Well great job overall because I felt like I was really getting into the story as Hitsugaya and Momo talked and expressed their emotions for each other...like aww xD

Hope to see more fanfics from you soon! Its been awhile!!

Random:
-Either Momo's just taller, or maybe she really is older than him [heh iunno how old they are, wish i knew]
-Whoa, alternate ending to Aizen that didnt involve Ichigo, niccee

aw...so sad!

NO SHIROU-CHAN! ;_;
::calms down::
Okay well aside from that, this was really good. I practically cried at the end when Hitsugaya was confessing.
>.< Baka Momo! But I want them to be together.. ::sniff::
Anyways, good job!

Ah, so I'm not the only one that goes around killing my favorite charcters! Anyway, that was a nice little oneshot, if a bit sad. I love Shirou-chan as well, and as much as I hate to read of him dying, you did a nice job.